Beauty Fall

[Trigger_003]

This is a bad song on my part I think, but I wasn't exactly feeling the most creative when I put this together. I'm really unhappy with it actually - it's pretty basic, pretty cliche - but everyone that's heard it thinks it works well as a bit of a catchy acoustic piece, so hey.
Any improvements/crits are much appreciated :). If you leave a link I'll see what I can do about a crit-for-crit, but it probably won't be anything speical I'm afraid.

Here goes:
Deprived of Sanity – Beauty Fall
© Deprived of Sanity, 1/12/05

Here we are now,
On the edge of decision,
Staring into silence,
Once again.

Can you see?

Find yourself,
Explain it to me,
What’s happened to you?
It’s not the same in a way.

And
Somehow
She’s more beautiful
But she’s got
Uglier by the day
And
Inside
She’s no longer perfect
Let her heart fall away

I cry,
You turn away from me...
Can you see?

You’re no better now
You aren’t even here
Anymore.
Face left heart behind
And let the beauty fall.

And
Somehow
She’s more beautiful
But she’s got
Uglier by the day
And
Inside
She’s no longer perfect
Let her heart fall away

[insert instrumental here]

And,
Somehow
She’s more beautiful
But she’s got
Uglier by the day.
And
Inside
She’s just not there
Let her heart fall away.

Fall away
Fall away
You’re not so beautiful.

Fall away
Fall away
You’re not so beautiful.

[Buhta]

Seems too short and repetitive - i don't say that's a bad thing, i like repetition..thats okay, if you worked on this piece by inserting a verse in it wouldn't be bad i think

Look at this http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=420320