Father Nature
12-04-2005, 11:02 PM
this is a song i wrote that i think is really weird... not sure what to think of it yet
Our life is fiction!
Everything fits our made up description
My knowledge is nothing but everyone elses
A brain grown from words and my lying senses
Thank you all for what you have given me
an existence of peace and your good company
turmoil comes from unexpected places
a chaotic center of unfixable choices
Forward is the only direction of time
And for each of us is but alimited supply
Each moment is the last of it's kind
but i'm just rambling pay me no mind
i'm just a rambling man
i'll never understand
i wrote it during detention at my school
it needs a good crit but i definitely like it
Our life is fiction!
Everything fits our made up description
My knowledge is nothing but everyone elses
A brain grown from words and my lying senses
Thank you all for what you have given me
an existence of peace and your good company
turmoil comes from unexpected places
a chaotic center of unfixable choices
Forward is the only direction of time
And for each of us is but alimited supply
Each moment is the last of it's kind
but i'm just rambling pay me no mind
i'm just a rambling man
i'll never understand
i wrote it during detention at my school
it needs a good crit but i definitely like it