2 chorus 12-bar blues solo

[moogoogaipan]

If you are a piano player...do not mock me. I'm taking a jazz piano class with Jerry Coker so I'm learning some neat stuff harmonically, but I'm not a piano player so techinque might sound sloppy.
I played the bass line and soloed with a funk sounding piano over top of it.
tell me what you think.


Click here to listen to g-jam-in-blues (http://media.putfile.com/g-jam-in-blues)

[moogoogaipan]

come on...just a listen please

[Popup-Box]

I enjoyed it. Interesting backing track, and the melodic piano phrasing was good.

Nothing to complain about, really. Would like more clips for listening.

[sublime-et-lager]

im not really a big technical theory based fella...but that i liked. made me think of a smokey bar with a woman laid on the piano

[moogoogaipan]

^^^i misread what you said... at first glance it looked like 'smokey bar with a woman getting laid on a piano"

thanks for the feedback... much appreciated.

[Ned]

^^^i misread what you said... at first glance it looked like 'smokey bar with a woman getting laid on a piano"

I suppose if it's smoky enough. Let's hope the piano's not a spinet.