antidote for loneliness
11-16-2005, 04:58 PM
By: Bianca.
(Smiles given, return back)
Opened arms you hug her neck
(Smiles given, return back)
Eye to eye mov-ing in closer X2
(Smiles given, return back)
Opened arms you hug her neck
(Smiles given, return back)
Eye to eye you’re moving closer
My eyes realize your lips are touching
My eyes realize you’re a lush and
You’re kissing, fingers interlocked
(Kissing, fingers interlocked)
You’re seeing eye-to-eye, say farewell
My Love…
No. Not to her, to me. Here is it all, all out
On the table for everybody listening
to hear What are Your feelings towards me now?
Yeah I was being kind of facetious
But go on and answer, I want to see what you have to say
And I ask this all in shame and to think I was your codependent
It makes me sick to the stomach. So this I promise:
I’m never a believer anymore,
Not when your name is mentioned.
(I'm sorry for telling
Everybody the truth about you) ((the truth about you))
(You’ll start to forgive me once
You learn from your mistakes)
Leave it like a rusty nail implanted
In your car tire as means of your
Plan to escape
(You’re getting nowhere fast,
You’re getting nowhere fast
And this I promise)
Or take it with you. I thought you said you’d take me with you.
So you’re a liar, and you’re lying after all this?
After all this? All I get is hell from you
Take my words to your heart; I keep my words locked in your heart,
Change it up to compare it to something more different
“I love you. I promise, I swear on my life its true”
Well you must be dead by now, like 30 times before today
I say you should get lost. Darling, my sweet darling
Didn’t you know that you’re dead to me already?
Take my words to asses and compare to something
More similar like a dust collection, left to linger
On your empty shelves. Maybe you’ll understand it better.
Either way you take these declaring words, please don’t call after all
Of this is through, I'm asking darling, take it to your heart
(This won’t be easy, trust me, and trust me)
(Count and mark this down as one of your regrets)
One closer look as you stare eye to eye
She’s eyeing your lips and your taking her hand
Into yours like before when you said you were
Just best friends. Now did I hear you right?
Evidently I believe you didn’t finish
Your sentence completely, correctly
(Fingers interlock, lips move closer)
(You are trying to get closer to her)
Correct me, if I’m wrong darling
But there are a few words that are missing there.
“I'm sorry you had to see it. I'm sorry I have to say this…”
I smiled sympathetically after hearing that from you.
you sign off with an “I'm oh so very
Sorry, do you forgive me? Will you forgive me? Please forgive me eventually”
Um. yeah, I don’t think so.
Good try, you almost had me on that last one.
What else do you have to say to me?
You reply “Call me later to work
Things out; I was going to tell you
Eye to eye but my courage has failed me now”
Do you have something better to say?
Cause right now in my book of favorites
Your name is at the last. And you always
Know just what to say to make my pretty
Make up run. Do you like the look on my face now?
Oh but I bet you do.
One closer look as you stare eye to eye
She’s eyeing your lips and your taking her hand
Into yours like before when you said you were
Just best friends did I hear you right?
Evidently I believe you didn’t finish (fingers inter lock, lips moving closer)
Your sentence completely, correctly
Correct me, if I’m wrong darling
But there are a few missing words
One begins with a B and concludes with an S.
(Can you figure it out, can you figure it out)
(Cause I’ve figured it out, yeah I’ve figured you out)
I bet you are real close; you’re oh so close
I mean that by your “just best friends” speech
I bet you are real close; you’re oh so close
Don’t forget the benefits, the ones you
Never seemed to care to mention
(trust me, trust me, its not easy being alone)
And I can tell that this wasn’t what I was expecting
of you I can tell this won’t be as easy
(trust me, trust me, its not easy being alone)
But I'm saying this in all forgiveness;
“I don’t want to be the one who’s broken”
(trust me, trust me, its not easy being alone)
This has been left untitled but any title suggestions are welcomed. I'd like to cut the length of it in half, but I have been having trouble with finding metaphors and similies to replace the long phrases. So I figured I'd leave it and see if any of you could help me fix it. Any help with that would be fantastic. ANY advice or opinion is welcomed. CRIT THIS AS HARSH AS YOU CAN.
(Smiles given, return back)
Opened arms you hug her neck
(Smiles given, return back)
Eye to eye mov-ing in closer X2
(Smiles given, return back)
Opened arms you hug her neck
(Smiles given, return back)
Eye to eye you’re moving closer
My eyes realize your lips are touching
My eyes realize you’re a lush and
You’re kissing, fingers interlocked
(Kissing, fingers interlocked)
You’re seeing eye-to-eye, say farewell
My Love…
No. Not to her, to me. Here is it all, all out
On the table for everybody listening
to hear What are Your feelings towards me now?
Yeah I was being kind of facetious
But go on and answer, I want to see what you have to say
And I ask this all in shame and to think I was your codependent
It makes me sick to the stomach. So this I promise:
I’m never a believer anymore,
Not when your name is mentioned.
(I'm sorry for telling
Everybody the truth about you) ((the truth about you))
(You’ll start to forgive me once
You learn from your mistakes)
Leave it like a rusty nail implanted
In your car tire as means of your
Plan to escape
(You’re getting nowhere fast,
You’re getting nowhere fast
And this I promise)
Or take it with you. I thought you said you’d take me with you.
So you’re a liar, and you’re lying after all this?
After all this? All I get is hell from you
Take my words to your heart; I keep my words locked in your heart,
Change it up to compare it to something more different
“I love you. I promise, I swear on my life its true”
Well you must be dead by now, like 30 times before today
I say you should get lost. Darling, my sweet darling
Didn’t you know that you’re dead to me already?
Take my words to asses and compare to something
More similar like a dust collection, left to linger
On your empty shelves. Maybe you’ll understand it better.
Either way you take these declaring words, please don’t call after all
Of this is through, I'm asking darling, take it to your heart
(This won’t be easy, trust me, and trust me)
(Count and mark this down as one of your regrets)
One closer look as you stare eye to eye
She’s eyeing your lips and your taking her hand
Into yours like before when you said you were
Just best friends. Now did I hear you right?
Evidently I believe you didn’t finish
Your sentence completely, correctly
(Fingers interlock, lips move closer)
(You are trying to get closer to her)
Correct me, if I’m wrong darling
But there are a few words that are missing there.
“I'm sorry you had to see it. I'm sorry I have to say this…”
I smiled sympathetically after hearing that from you.
you sign off with an “I'm oh so very
Sorry, do you forgive me? Will you forgive me? Please forgive me eventually”
Um. yeah, I don’t think so.
Good try, you almost had me on that last one.
What else do you have to say to me?
You reply “Call me later to work
Things out; I was going to tell you
Eye to eye but my courage has failed me now”
Do you have something better to say?
Cause right now in my book of favorites
Your name is at the last. And you always
Know just what to say to make my pretty
Make up run. Do you like the look on my face now?
Oh but I bet you do.
One closer look as you stare eye to eye
She’s eyeing your lips and your taking her hand
Into yours like before when you said you were
Just best friends did I hear you right?
Evidently I believe you didn’t finish (fingers inter lock, lips moving closer)
Your sentence completely, correctly
Correct me, if I’m wrong darling
But there are a few missing words
One begins with a B and concludes with an S.
(Can you figure it out, can you figure it out)
(Cause I’ve figured it out, yeah I’ve figured you out)
I bet you are real close; you’re oh so close
I mean that by your “just best friends” speech
I bet you are real close; you’re oh so close
Don’t forget the benefits, the ones you
Never seemed to care to mention
(trust me, trust me, its not easy being alone)
And I can tell that this wasn’t what I was expecting
of you I can tell this won’t be as easy
(trust me, trust me, its not easy being alone)
But I'm saying this in all forgiveness;
“I don’t want to be the one who’s broken”
(trust me, trust me, its not easy being alone)
This has been left untitled but any title suggestions are welcomed. I'd like to cut the length of it in half, but I have been having trouble with finding metaphors and similies to replace the long phrases. So I figured I'd leave it and see if any of you could help me fix it. Any help with that would be fantastic. ANY advice or opinion is welcomed. CRIT THIS AS HARSH AS YOU CAN.