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[Borgieboy23]

um well this song is sort of led zepplin soundish and yeah its for my band

if you're looking for trouble
i know where you should go
head towards the land
of the falling snow
oh no.......


if you're looking for peace
boy i tell you go east
where the battles have already been fought
and the women are hot
oh the women are hot..

if you are lost i'll help you find your way
promise me one thing you'll do what ever i say
and if you are found well...
that really doesn't matter now

lost or found that really doesn't matter now
lost or found that really doesn't matter now
lost or found that really doesn't matter now
lost or found that really doesn't matter now

did you tan in the sunshine
did you freeze in the cold
did you talk to the women
oh aren't you that bold
oh aren't you that bold

did you go north
or did you go south
did you go east or west

did you go north
or did you go south
did you go east or west

which direction seems best
which direction seems best

(guitar solo)

did you find your trouble
did you find your peace
did you find your master
oh did you head east
oh did you head east

let me sing it one last time
for old times sake

lost or found that really doesn't matter now
lost or found that really doesn't matter now

really doesn't matter now
really doesn't matter now
really doesn't matter now........

[DeadReligion]

Other than the shitty rhyming, and repetitiveness in the end, this is quite funny...it almost seems DKish...in that its funny, the lyrical content isn't all that much like Jello's. Anyway, I really like this, other than what I said before. I mean, it'd be half a page in stead of a whole one with all that damn repetitiveness.

[Iamanidiot]

Dude, it is funny, but I don't mean to be harsh, but this is pretty weak, or maybe I'm missing the point of the whole song.