Clobberin' Time

[DeadReligion]

Despite the kissing line, this isn't about a girl. Shred it.

Clobberin' Time

(Verse 1)
I’m led by contempt
I’ve never felt so inept
Like a volcano, I’m about to erupt
I feel ****ed
Pry me like a pair of pliers
My eyes never could spot a lie
My lips never could kiss her
My finger was never strong enough to pull a trigger

(Bridge)
My blood boils, at such a low temperature
The morning is a cutting overture
An introduction to a painful afternoon

(Verse 3)
Remember
Words are weapons
Information is the ammo
And they’ve got a full clip
As bullets fire, skin and organs rip
Maelstrom bomb
I’m led by my contempt
I’ve never felt so inept
Nowhere to vent
My brain is painfully bent
My attitude is abhorrently caustic
You’ve turned my heart dark, acerbic

(Outro)
Words are weapons
Information is the ammo
And they’ve got a full clip
As bullets fire, skin and organs rip
My blood boils, at such a low temperature
The morning is a cutting overture
An introduction to a painful afternoon

[DeadReligion]

****, I did it again...my internet was being slow...anyway, could one of the admin's lend me a hand?

[JonnyboyM151]

Dude make this a song about clobbering some dude

[FA]

hooray for triple post!

[tell.me.something.typical]

****, I did it again...my internet was being slow...anyway, could one of the admin's lend me a hand?
Haha thats ok, it happens to me all the time; dial-up right? It sucks.

[DeadReligion]

Now for an actual crit, please. :-). I'd appreciate it.