It's true (crit for a crit)

[Silverhammer]

nothing

[omgwtfboogie]

The rhyming is really simple. It makes it sound like a rap song. Maybe that was your intention?

Also, the part with the dolphin just lost me completely. I can't tell if that's serious or not.

[Walrus]

i agree with OMG it is good but i dont know where it goes when it starts talking about dolphins and the walrus but there are cool parts to it.

And I, believe, it's true
Yes I, believe, it's true
The stars, agree, me too
Yes I, believe, it's true


i like this chorus and find meself wanting to rob it hahah ...joking

[Walrus]

please crit - a moments peace ...

[KillaBink]

I like it. I don't think you're trying to scratch the surface with hidden meanings or anything along those lines, it's meant to be light on the listener's ears. It doesn't come off as a rap song either. You got yourself a pretty good song. The only suggestion I would make is in the chorus:

And I, believe, it's true
Yes I, believe, it's true
The stars, agree, along with me
Yes they, believe, it too

[Silverhammer]

nothing