So I thought I'd try writing a song.

[FeralCats]

I'm a pretty good composer, but when It comes to lyrics, I suck.
So I thought I'd randomly write lyrics.

Here's one now-it's called 'Gonna Get Some By The End Of The Year'.
Yeah, here it is-

In The Beggining of time
didn't even know how to rhyme.
I didn't even have my own motto
I lost my dream girl to a guy named Otto.

I don't have no friends
can't meet my ends
don't have a street car
can't even drink in no bars.

But I gotta make sure
no matter what
That I'm gonna some
who cares if she's a slut?

Gonna get some by the end of the year
preferably with some wiggling ears.
Gonna get some by the end of the year
Yeah I'll make her start screaming loud and clear!

First I'll buy some Co-log-nuh
then I'll give up on buttah
Maybe I'll kill my acne
so then-some girls will whack me!

(Repeat 'I don't have friends' part on.)

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....I had fun writing that. I hate a few of the rhymes, though :lol:

[JMDavis07]

that was great and horrible at the same time lol

[few_dollars_more]

Here's one now-it's called 'Gonna Get Some By The End Of The Year'.
Yeah, here it is-

In The Beggining of time
didn't even know how to rhyme.
I didn't even have my own motto
I lost my dream girl to a guy named Otto.



The rhymes are all extremley forced here.


I don't have no friends
can't meet my ends
don't have a street car
can't even drink in no bars.


Again, rhyming extremely forced. This verse could be alot better with soem changes here and there because I see the overall message.


But I gotta make sure
no matter what
That I'm gonna some
who cares if she's a slut?


Rhymes are less forced here, *gonna *get* some* is what i think u meant


Gonna get some by the end of the year
preferably with some wiggling ears.
Gonna get some by the end of the year
Yeah I'll make her start screaming loud and clear!


Repetitive and forced


First I'll buy some Co-log-nuh
then I'll give up on buttah
Maybe I'll kill my acne
so then-some girls will whack me!


I'm confused, first you were talking about a specific girl, now ur talking about getting it from anyone. Mixed messages.


Not very good at all(Not trying to sound mean) But all the rhymes are forced, slightly repetitive, and adolescent lyrics. 3/10

P.S. Crit mine if you'd be so kind