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FeralCats
11-13-2005, 07:09 PM
I'm a pretty good composer, but when It comes to lyrics, I suck.
So I thought I'd randomly write lyrics.

Here's one now-it's called 'Gonna Get Some By The End Of The Year'.
Yeah, here it is-

In The Beggining of time
didn't even know how to rhyme.
I didn't even have my own motto
I lost my dream girl to a guy named Otto.

I don't have no friends
can't meet my ends
don't have a street car
can't even drink in no bars.

But I gotta make sure
no matter what
That I'm gonna some
who cares if she's a slut?

Gonna get some by the end of the year
preferably with some wiggling ears.
Gonna get some by the end of the year
Yeah I'll make her start screaming loud and clear!

First I'll buy some Co-log-nuh
then I'll give up on buttah
Maybe I'll kill my acne
so then-some girls will whack me!

(Repeat 'I don't have friends' part on.)

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....I had fun writing that. I hate a few of the rhymes, though :lol:

Jubella
11-14-2005, 05:20 AM
the idea may be good and i know that it's not serious and all, but i have to admit that i don't really liked it. Your rhymes seem forced, it don't flow very well. Maybe you should try to write without rhymes? I'm pretty lame with rhymes, but without, my wrintings make a lot better sense. Maybe it will be the case for you too.
"That I'm gonna some" : i think you forgot the get!

TxAxNxD13
11-14-2005, 08:00 PM
Best Song Ever

Sundancekid
11-15-2005, 02:04 PM
i agree

omgwtfboogie
11-15-2005, 03:42 PM
that was the shiz
you should be in da music biz
lol!!