I thought I'd try something different...

[ANAC]

I see a tear, falling from your eye.
A falling angel, down from the sky.
Down towards Earth, down towards it's doom.
Life ain't that bad, so why are you in gloom.

Another tear, running down your cheek.
Running like love, love so many seek.
You are my angel, you are my love.
You are what my dreams are made of.

Critisism welcome as usual.

[MidnightHysteria]

I really like the imagery presented in the first three lines, but I'm quite disappointed after that when the piece devolves into little more than clichés and forced rhymes.

[ANAC]

I see a tear, falling from your eye.
A falling angel, down from the sky.
Down towards Earth, down towards it's doom.
Down towards the scent, of your sweet perfume.

Another tear, running down your face.
Like all those years, gone without a trace.
Gone into abyss, disapeared into a void.
From something revived, into something destroyed.

I worked a bit on the cliches...

[Jubella]

the second one is real better! i really like the last line