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BlackVanillaSky
11-12-2005, 02:25 PM
Hey guys, I've posted individual songs of myself up here before but now I'm posting songs from my band. I'd really appreciate some reviews here.

http://www.myspace.com/nowest

We just made a new song called Back, and I really want a review of that.

If you have the time, then this would be much appreciated.

*The songs on the site are recorded acoustically. And by recorded I mean sitting in front of the computer with the mic. But we do have a sample of our drummer from like last year. He did a talent show. If I get live recordings, I'll post those so you can hear full band.

I'll crit whoever crits mine, as long as a link is supplied.

slack
11-12-2005, 02:59 PM
audio arena. :thumb:

few_dollars_more
11-12-2005, 04:30 PM
I actually really liked the song. The guitar riffs were great, and they flowed perfectly with the lyrics. I can't really find much to crit cause I did like that peice alot. If anything could make it better I think adding back-up vocals would make it sound alot better. Keep up the good work, 8.5/10

Crit my lyrics if you would be so kind,
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=410480

Iron_Weed
11-12-2005, 04:48 PM
It felt quite well written and it seems like your band knows how to get thier instruments to work together. That said though, it was quite a generic song that didn't really do alot to capture my attention and I personally wouldn't listen to it. Your singing was a little flat at times too. Sorry I can't be of more help but this isn't really my kind of music.

If you're feeling generous pay my new song a visit
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=412594

DeadReligion
11-13-2005, 02:14 PM
As SlackJaw said...audio arena.