Challenge 97- Replies

[ATC]

Buzzz

I now have a drink named after me. A Sambucca shot dropped into a glass of Heineken is now named after me at two pubs in the city. :chug:

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

I'm trying to remember how to make a Buffalo Sweat. Is it vodka and hot sauce?

[TojesDolan]

I searched on the internet. And I found a sex toy advert that gave me a thousand pop ups.

NO I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT A BUFFALO SWEET IS. :D

Wax seems a little tough to add. I'll try, I have some poems in the oven. :)

[ATC]

I think it's a rum drink. I remember them having that at a pirate themed party once. Didn't try that one but the official drink was rum.

[DFelon204409]

The melting point of wax means nothing to me

[SubtleDagger]

/hates "The Melting Point Of Wax"

[TojesDolan]

/is completely ingorant on what's going on :-/

[ATC]

Melting point of wax is a Thrice song.

[xKONRADx]

I bet dfelon cant keep that up for exactly one week.

[Dancin' Man]

but he will try. I'll help by agreeing with him.

[CSD & the Soul Machines]

Hi.

[Crimsonpunk]

Me and my mate have our own drink, it's called a 'nicandy'
Me being nick and him being andrew.
It consists of ice cream, lemonade and whiskey. And if you make it right, it looks like a beer with a head of ice cream. I suggest you all try it.

[Disco Dragon]

That sounds disgusting. I suggest you try it only if you want to puke up small pieces of your liver.

Oh, and welcome back Mighty Morph. Good to see you come back around these parts.

[CSD & the Soul Machines]

Good to be back. I've been pretty busy with my band lately. We're starting to get it together. Played show local shows with just my singer and me, and we're expanding at the moment.

[xKONRADx]

sd, did you just write that in the last day or have you had that around for a while?

[Bigbadbob]

DAM...they blocked access to this place at work. Why even show up if I cant f-off on the computer all day? Now Sdagger is winning all the challenges with his "vanilla" songs. Wanted to make at least to #100.

[Dancin' Man]

I submitted a rap. I refrained from the word "Cha"

[TojesDolan]

I see... the rap I said I was going to review... I'm too lazy and that's too much content.. :(

Sorry Dancin'. I'm so weak. :upset:

Anyhow... I have some in mind. But most of my "best" poems so far are in the works so I may just adjust one of them.

[SubtleDagger]

sd, did you just write that in the last day or have you had that around for a while?
I wrote it from about 11:50 to 12:00 earlier today.
Now Sdagger is winning all the challenges with his "vanilla" songs.
"Vanilla"?

I've only won like two in the past six months.

[pixiesfanyo]

Vanillllla Milkshakes are tasty

[Dancin' Man]

My milkshake brings all the boys to the yard...

[TojesDolan]

And they're like, it's better thank yours

I can teach, but I'd have to charge.

*ting*

I prefer "Trick me". It's catchier.

[DFelon204409]

Me and my mate have our own drink, it's called a 'nicandy'
Me being nick and him being andrew.
It consists of ice cream, lemonade and whiskey. And if you make it right, it looks like a beer with a head of ice cream. I suggest you all try it.

My friend and I made up a mixed drink called "The Black Death." We discovered it while mixing all the drinks we had available, which were unfiltered coffee grounds, boiling water, Popov vodka, and a splash of Milwaukee's Best Light. You just think about that.

[DFelon204409]

Oh ya here's my prospective schedule for next semester:

MUS 202: Music Theory IIb
MUS 207: Music History: From Antiquity to Baroque
ECON 120: Macroeconomics
ENGL 364: Advanced Writing of Poetry

The music classes I'm taking for my major and the econ I'm taking in case I need it for business school one day. However, it's either that poetry class or a class called Adaptation where I study screenplays and produce my own by the end of the semester. It only comes every two years and seems pretty cool. I may take it senior year. Any suggestions or recommended vetos?

[xKONRADx]

I suggest you take another class. that seems like an easy load. but, they all sound fun.

[xKONRADx]

I submitted a rap. I refrained from the word "Cha"
rap sucks, i vote hip hop.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Macroeconomics is the devil.

[DFelon204409]

I suggest you take another class. that seems like an easy load. but, they all sound fun.

Four classes is the standard at my school plus I'm an officer for Rugby, WCFM (radio station), and trying to start my band up. I don't need anything new. Oh ya, I do lit review and am in a jazz ensemble too. 5 classes would kill me.

[CSD & the Soul Machines]

I made a really drunken drink called... Sir Thomas Jefferson and His Merry Band of Misfits...we were totally smashed before we made it.

-Everclear
-Salami
-Black Pepper
-Miller High Life
-a Seven of Spades

...I drank two ( minus the seven on the 2nd one) ...then puked, a LOT

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

This weekend is homecoming for JMU. I plan on being drunk from Thursday to Tuesday... perhaps a hilarious round of posting will ensue.

[ATC]

I got my beard braided today. Yay. Halloween is an excuse like no other for facial hair adjustment.

[CSD & the Soul Machines]

I wish I could grow a beard.

[super deluxe]

Halloween is an excuse like no other for facial hair adjustment.

I'm hoping that hairy-back-man in my seminar class will cornrow the pelt crawling up his neck in honor of Halloween.

[ATC]

I'm hoping that hairy-back-man in my seminar class will cornrow the pelt crawling up his neck in honor of Halloween.

A kinky thing, aren't you? :naughty:


PS: Body hair does not count.

[super deluxe]

A kinky thing, aren't you? :naughty:



Kinky is using a feather.


You, on the other hand, prefer the whole chicken. :naughty:

[Dancin' Man]

I like the way my facial hair is too thin to grow a full beard. Right now it's somewhere between ratty and my face looking just dirty. I should glue pubes on my cheeks.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

I like the way my facial hair is too thin to grow a full beard. Right now it's somewhere between ratty and my face looking just dirty. I should glue pubes on my cheeks.

Yeah do that, I hear it's what all the middle schoolers are doing.

[Dancin' Man]

Middle schoolers don't have pubes.


... unless they get them from the shower drain.

[SubtleDagger]

I'm pretty sure I did in middle school.

[ATC]

Kinky is using a feather.


You, on the other hand, prefer the whole chicken. :naughty:

You know me so well. :)

At 20, I still cannot grow a mustache. Not that I want one, but it's annoying having to shave down off the top of my lip every few days.

[TojesDolan]

I grew hair on my balls when I was 13. It started like, on the sides of the wang. two bushes of hair, I remember. yeah.

But I have a really gay facial hair. I'm 18 and I don't have major facial hair. I'm not that hairy, either.

Yeah, hair talk.

[super deluxe]

Hairesy!

[TojesDolan]

I concur.

I can't write lately because I'm really clogged with school. meh, I'll post something later. Some crits are on it's way, though. Unless, of course, I find it boring or too advanced. You'll see the difference.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Enough about the genitalia.

[DFelon204409]

Tojes I though you were a she. Obviously you're the new gaslight.

[ATC]

My date does not believe in Halloween. I have to find a non Halloween type event on Halloween I can take her to because she refuses to conform to conformity. :upset: It's my favorite festival :upset:

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

So I've had about 14 shots tonight. I guess I started early, anyone have any good drinking stories?

[ATC]

17 and you can have some good times getting your stomach pumped. :thumb:

[super deluxe]

Tojes I though you were a she. Obviously you're the new gaslight.

And pink is the new black!

[DFelon204409]

Anal is the new black.

[ATC]

That is soo 1990s, d00d.


Nasal is the new black.

[xKONRADx]

Anal is the new black.
That sounds familiar.

[SubtleDagger]

Tojes I though you were a she.
Yeah

[Dancin' Man]

How am I supposed to pronounce Tojes Dolan?

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

toe jays doe lan

[Crimsonpunk]

Enough about the genitalia.

Never!

[Crimsonpunk]

And on the subject of haloween.. I think the trick is to get so sh,itfaced you communicate with the dead

[ATC]

I think its To-hes Dolan.

[Dancin' Man]

I've always gone with the bad spanish accent... To-ays Dolan... with a long lan.

[xKONRADx]

And on the subject of haloween.. I think the trick is to get so sh,itfaced you communicate with the dead
If youre going to spend the money to get that drunk, you might as well skip the conversation and get to the fellation.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Nine dollar handle of Aristocrat Vodka.

[TojesDolan]

Tojes I though you were a she. Obviously you're the new gaslight.

wow... I guess it's either my songwriting, my attitude or my gay avatars... hmm.... I don't look like a girl, though. Even if I wear make-up. I'd be a good transexual, though.

Yeah

what

How am I supposed to pronounce Tojes Dolan?

However you may want, either Tou(yes rising sound I don't have the symbol for that)-yes, Tou-geez, Tou-jays... Or strong J (like Tou-haze). As for dolan, it's more simple. Doh-lan, with stress in "Doh".

Yeah. I don't know what you may need the pronounciation key, though, unless you think as you write stuff on the internet, and you think out loud.

So say it whatever you want.

I'm a little concerned on what made you think I am a female, Dfelon. I think I stress the use of the word vagina way too much on this forums to make that clear.

[Dancin' Man]

Nine dollar handle of Aristocrat Vodka.
Rubbing alcohol?

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Pretty much.

[gaslight]

Tojes I though you were a she. Obviously you're the new gaslight.

:lol:

Longest running S&L joke ever?

[ATC]

:lol:

Longest running S&L joke ever?

OMG Oestrogen Alert!

[TojesDolan]

He's gone, whoever it was.

That was swift.

Seemed pretty cool. NO stars, but very cool.

[CSD & the Soul Machines]

Pretty much.

Kinda like Skoal if you've heard of that. $10 for a 1.75 ...baaaaad stuff.

[DFelon204409]

gaslight, I like how I can always make you post with that joke.

Asso, this just in: Dancin' Man's avatar is the same tempo as "Whacko Jacko Steal the Elephant Man's Bones" by The Fall of Troy. Coincidence? I think not.

[TojesDolan]

So... I posted my most thoughtful song in LC ever, instead of just posting a B-side or one of those leftovers... I hope you enjoy it. :)

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

So... I posted my most thoughtful song in LC ever, instead of just posting a B-side or one of those leftovers... I hope you enjoy it. :)
Failure!

[Disco Dragon]

Yeah...who the hell wants to read something with thought behind it? I like my songs stupid and insignificant! Now get with the program Toejam...

[Crimsonpunk]

Will it be held against me if I randomly insert the word into one of my exsisting songs??

[Crimsonpunk]

Kinda like Skoal if you've heard of that. $10 for a 1.75 ...baaaaad stuff.

Skol is also a 2 percent british beer, damn, you'd explode before you got pissed

[RunAmokRampant]

Will it be held against me if I randomly insert the word into one of my exsisting songs??

Yes it will, unless you like last place.

[Dancin' Man]

I'm eating cheese fries.

[TojesDolan]

I'm going to a party dressed like Robert Smith. :)

Failure!

I know. I must be the worst songwriter on LC. Like, ever. :upset:

[Dancin' Man]

My band has a really super crappy recording up.
http://www.myspace.com/tdpny

[TojesDolan]

I'll check it out. Hey dancin' I made something some time ago that I want you to check:

http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=400426

It's not as old as "Or law is crime" But I wasn't around to bump it that much.

Yeah Whoring poetry. :D

[ATC]

I've got some instrumental demos up that I recorded today for my singer to listen and then write a song together with.

www.purevolume.com/anticarnation

[Dancin' Man]

Wow, I really like that ATC. TD - I'll check it.

[RunAmokRampant]

Well I'm not in a band atm, but I know a few local bands that are going to make it big international in the near future. Check out www.fivestarprisoncell.com and you can download one of their songs from their debut album. They are one of my favourite australian bands. Fans of dillinger, SOAD and probably Mike Patton will approve

[Crimsonpunk]

Last place, eh?
Sounds like a step up

[Crimsonpunk]

Was anyone at reading 2000?
The dillinger vocalist shat into a bag and threw it in the crowd. Now that's showmanship.

[RunAmokRampant]

Thats old news. I wouldn't have gone coz the rest of the bands were shithouse and that's the reason why Greg did it. He made a statement by doing that.

[Crimsonpunk]

Thats old news. I wouldn't have gone coz the rest of the bands were shithouse and that's the reason why Greg did it. He made a statement by doing that.

I know, I just wanted to be part of the moment, and while we're on the subject---

Jimmy eat world
Feeder
Saves the day
Weezer
Offspring (although they are pretty **** now)
Finch
>>>>>>>HELL IS FOR HEROES <<<<<<<
Raging speedhorn (Don't knock em untill youv'e seen em live)

I rest my case, the case that you brought up.

I played a live show today and ended with '**** you and goodnight'
How long have I been waiting for that

[Crimsonpunk]

215 is a nice round number

[SubtleDagger]

I know, I just wanted to be part of the moment, and while we're on the subject---

Jimmy eat world
Feeder
Saves the day
Weezer
Offspring (although they are pretty **** now)
Finch
>>>>>>>HELL IS FOR HEROES <<<<<<<
Raging speedhorn (Don't knock em untill youv'e seen em live)

I rest my case, the case that you brought up.

I played a live show today and ended with '**** you and goodnight'
How long have I been waiting for that
Aside from Saves The Day (who are merely alright), those bands are ****ing terrible.
215 is a nice round number
Quit postcount whoring.

[Dancin' Man]

I just played a show. A Katrina Benefit. It was lame. The sound guy was a douche who didn't know how to work the PA but insisted he did, before and after we showed him what he was doing wrong (it's our PA so we aren't just jack asses) then he made the crowd back way up after we told them to move forward because there was like a 20 foot gap between us. I did a split jump though so all was well. Then Benjamin Lee South told me stories that were simultaneously very funny and extremely depressing.

[RunAmokRampant]

I know, I just wanted to be part of the moment, and while we're on the subject---

Jimmy eat world
Feeder
Saves the day
Weezer
Offspring (although they are pretty **** now)
Finch
>>>>>>>HELL IS FOR HEROES <<<<<<<
Raging speedhorn (Don't knock em untill youv'e seen em live)

I rest my case, the case that you brought up.

I played a live show today and ended with '**** you and goodnight'
How long have I been waiting for that


Wow, that list is worse than mine :wave:

[ATC]

I just played a show. A Katrina Benefit. It was lame. The sound guy was a douche who didn't know how to work the PA but insisted he did, before and after we showed him what he was doing wrong (it's our PA so we aren't just jack asses) then he made the crowd back way up after we told them to move forward because there was like a 20 foot gap between us. I did a split jump though so all was well. Then Benjamin Lee South told me stories that were simultaneously very funny and extremely depressing.

Haha. So it's not as uncommon as I thought. Oo and is Benjamin Lee south the guy mentioned in your songtitle on your site?

I hate pirate hats that are one size too small. Does anyone know how silly a pirate looks awkwardly dancing with a hand clutched to his hat to prevent it from falling off? Sums up my Halloween.

I have a funny story about a practice session where I tried doing a long jump while playing. After two unsuccessful attempts, I finally made it across the carpet. The cables however,didnt. I clean yanked the spare cable out the amp.

[Dancin' Man]

Yeah, Benjammin' is the good new writer on the scene here. He lives like 20 minutes from me and we like to go to shows and rag on the other bands.

[SubtleDagger]

Your music's pretty good. I hate to say it but it does need a bit more consistency.

I'd probably like it a lot more if it were recorded a bit better, though.

[Dancin' Man]

Thanks. We're trying to cut down on the chuggas and we have studio time booked for a month from now so we'lls ee how things go.

[ATC]

This thread dies tomorrow at 9 pm my time (Pacific).

You have been warned.

[Crimsonpunk]

Nothing ruins the taste of peanut butter like unrequited love

This has to be the greatest title ever

[xKONRADx]

This thread dies tomorrow at 9 pm my time (Pacific).

You have been warned.
This one does? I think youve got the wrong thread. I suggest executing the challenge thread. Replies is innocent, ill testify as an alibi.

[ATC]

This one does? I think youve got the wrong thread. I suggest executing the challenge thread. Replies is innocent, ill testify as an alibi.

Off with its head!

[SubtleDagger]

What, now?

[Scarred4Life]

Nothing ruins the taste of peanut butter like unrequited love

This has to be the greatest title ever

Hehe I thought it was pretty nifty

[ATC]

What, now?

Nahh. Later tonight.

I meant off with the alibi's head.

[SubtleDagger]

So I can close it now?

[ATC]

You really want to close it, don't you? :p

[SubtleDagger]

close it
Really?

[TojesDolan]

No wait plz let me make a little sexy improvement.

OK forget it go ahead. :)

[ITRIEDVOODOOONCE]

blah, i suck writers block. Do i still get to do the next one or am i banned for one?

[xKONRADx]

you get to enter the next one.

[Disco Dragon]

My masterpiece will have to wait to be unveiled at the next challenge. Seriously, it's like the longest period of time I've ever spent working on one song. Ridiculous I tell ya...

[Scarred4Life]

My masterpiece will have to wait to be unveiled at the next challenge. Seriously, it's like the longest period of time I've ever spent working on one song. Ridiculous I tell ya...

I salivate in anticipation.

[xKONRADx]

My masterpiece will have to wait to be unveiled at the next challenge. Seriously, it's like the longest period of time I've ever spent working on one song. Ridiculous I tell ya...
can you be so certian it will contain the challenge word?

[TojesDolan]

can you be so certian it will contain the challenge word?
He can add it, you silly willy. :)

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Y'all bitches need ta recognize.

[xKONRADx]

He can add it, you silly willy. :)
I doubt he is that lame. Why would you add some arbitrary word to your masterpiece?

[Crimsonpunk]

Y'all bitches need ta recognize.

We should battle sometime

[TojesDolan]

PLEASE BURT CLOSE THOSE THREADS OF THIS KID WHO CAN'T READ THE RULES

I'm sorry but otherwise you won't see it. Apparently someone needs a lesson or two on internet modesty. :-/

[SubtleDagger]

I would have seen it the next time I came in, or Nick would have. You typing in bold size seven doesn't really help get the point across any better, especially since this thread isn't exactly the first place I go to look for problems with the forums.

[Dancin' Man]

it shud b u jurk.

I saw my new favorite food name.
Tofurky.

Tofu sucks.

[TojesDolan]

I would have seen it the next time I came in, or Nick would have. You typing in bold size seven doesn't really help get the point across any better, especially since this thread isn't exactly the first place I go to look for problems with the forums.
You should have a "report problem users" somewhere. Considering you're not online ALL the time. :(

[pixiesfanyo]

You should have a "report problem users" somewhere. Considering you're not online ALL the time. :(

See Site Forum

[TojesDolan]

See Site Forum
mmm... I was thinking about an S&L strictly personal repot problems... but I guess I can bitch there, too. :)

[SubtleDagger]

You're kind of missing the point.

A thread in LC that doesn't belong there isn't killing anyone. I'll get to it when I get to it. Which is probably some time after 4:00 in the morning.

[Dancin' Man]

Plus, most of us are mature enough to ignore it and lead the guy in the correct direction, even if he is a complete idiot.

[xKONRADx]

can we get some crizits in this bizitch

[Disco Dragon]

I doubt he is that lame. Why would you add some arbitrary word to your masterpiece?

If the word fits in with the theme of my song, then I'll add it. Otherwise, I'll work on something else for the next one and keep my "masterpiece" on the backburner until its appropriate.

[xKONRADx]

If the word fits in with the theme of my song, then I'll add it. Otherwise, I'll work on something else for the next one and keep my "masterpiece" on the backburner until its appropriate.
dont be a lame ***!

[Dancin' Man]

Man, my rap is tres unliked. Also, the use of "wondered" in my lyrics is correct so for those who think I misspelled wandered, you are wrong. There is one typo somewhere in there (you're vs your) but fixing it can't happen.

[TojesDolan]

I don't know dancin'... urgh...

nothing.

Maybe it's too much of content? Like, when you see big jugs. You really want to take a bite of those chunks, but you know you might choke on them... and the milk is so tender... mmm... boobies.

[Dancin' Man]

Mmmm... boobs are nice. I saw a beauteous set today while watching Hable Con Ella.

[KeepingTheBlade]

i wasn't sure about the wondered and wandered but i definitely noticed the you're.

[KeepingTheBlade]

how come nobody ever votes with crits? it's always just numbers.

[RunAmokRampant]

Because they're goddamned lazy.

Anyway I saw Doom today and I thought it pretty entertaining. I am planning to see Saw 2 as well when it comes out because I enjoyed the first one. Anyone else seen these films?

[Disco Dragon]

I just viewed Saw 2 last night, and I must say that it was about 2000x better than the original. Anyone remember the horrific acting of Cary Elwes? Yeah.....but the acting was actually good, even by that guy from New Kids On the Block. Also, keep your eyes peeled for the ending.......

[xKONRADx]

how come nobody ever votes with crits? it's always just numbers.
if someone is that lazy, you can request a crit from them and theyre required to give one or theyre votes will be dq'd.

[RunAmokRampant]

Yeah the acting wasn't that special in the original. Not even Danny Glover was up to his standard. Still a clever movie. Ive been hearing that this sequel is better than the first. Hmmm, it's not out yet in Australia, but I'm definitely going to see it.

[KeepingTheBlade]

i downloaded it the other day.. it's alright. i liked the first one better. i still haven't seen doom.. it's somewhere on my computer i just haven't bothered watching it yet.

[ATC]

Doom wasn't too good. I have no idea if they were faithful to the game or not since I'm not a gamer but it felt so contrived. Clunky dialogue though the ending action sequence was pretty cool. Ten bucks says the Rock comes back and does a similar thing like in The Scorpion King or Mummy 2. He's going to make a career of playing half humans.

[RunAmokRampant]

Its not a movie that's meant to be taken seriously. It is loosely based on the game as it has the same company involved and there are zombies and there is the BFG 9000 weapon. And yes the end sequence was pretty cool and funny.

[DeadReligion]

Making movies from games is just an idiot idea anyway...

[RunAmokRampant]

Yeah but they are entertaining and it's rare for hollywood to come up with an original idea anymore.

[TojesDolan]

Usually game movies are not exactly what you expect.

Except for the Mario movie. That one kicked arse. With the giant goombas lol.

[xKONRADx]

Usually game movies are not exactly what you expect.

Except for the Mario movie. That one kicked arse. With the giant goombas lol.
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[Scarred4Life]

Lowridden, I would like a crit of my song please.

As it stands now, I'm getting good rankings from writers who I respect and would want to have enjoy my piece, and getting bad rankings from people I've never heard of. Alas.

[TojesDolan]

Yes Lowridden, something for me would be sexy as well.

[DFelon204409]

Lowridden, I would like a crit of my song please.

As it stands now, I'm getting good rankings from writers who I respect and would want to have enjoy my piece, and getting bad rankings from people I've never heard of. Alas.

Welcome to LC, would like you like a tiny violin solo with your obvious complaint?

[SubtleDagger]

Welcome to LC, would like you like a tiny violin solo with your obvious complaint?
Hey quit complaining about the complaining.

[TojesDolan]

Hey quit complaining about the complaining.
LOL patronizing about complaining for complaining.

OK I'll shut up. :upset:

[Scarred4Life]

Welcome to LC, would like you like a tiny violin solo with your obvious complaint?
Piss off please. :) I happen to play violin.

[KeepingTheBlade]

Hopefully things will start picking up again... i'm still waiting for the triumphant come back from all the greats and vets... Bob, Drummergirl who is probably dead now, jurialmunky

[SubtleDagger]

Hopefully things will start picking up again... i'm still waiting for the triumphant come back from all the greats and vets... Bob, Drummergirl who is probably dead now, jurialmunky
Who are you?

[Lowridenn]

Scarred4Life - The whole piece reads as a nursery rhyme, something I'm not fond of. There was some good lines in it Waxen features melt / an expression of regret / Recall forgetten sins / misshapen silhouettes for instance, as well as The sanguine tide embraces / the midnight and the shore / And ivory darts will mar / since conscience is a whore. For such a structured piece the syllable count varies quite a bit, especially within the last three lines of each stanza, which I didn't care for anyway. Compared to other pieces in this challange, I did not think it was as good. I must say, however, kudos to the title.

TojesDoLan - It was quite bland. Not terribly bad, but not great either, especially when placed up against some of the other pieces in this challange. The second stanza really didn't do it for me, and the last stanza was somewhat of a let down. And there were some grammatical errors.

[DFelon204409]

Hopefully things will start picking up again... i'm still waiting for the triumphant come back from all the greats and vets... Bob, Drummergirl who is probably dead now, jurialmunky

Drummergirl was in that insane car crash and had he bro post on her account that she almost died but is better now. Then she came back for like 6 months and then disappeared.

[KeepingTheBlade]

oh yeah.. i remember that.

[KeepingTheBlade]

Who are you?

Yeah.. apparently people think i'm new but i'm sure it's obvious now that i'm not.

[RunAmokRampant]

Just out of curiosity, what were your past username(s)?

[Crimsonpunk]

Yo, lowriden, you may aswell do me one

[SubtleDagger]

Yeah.. apparently people think i'm new but i'm sure it's obvious now that i'm not.
Gee, thanks for telling me what I already know.

I asked who you were for a reason.

EDIT: Okay, you're k.s.e. God forbid you could just tell us these things instead of having me ip scan.

[DFelon204409]

Hahah there goes his mystery.

[SubtleDagger]

LC needs no mystery and intrigue. There aren't enough masterpieces for this to be Masterpiece Theatre.

[KeepingTheBlade]

i'll make sure to log in with a proxy from China next time.

i actually did this cause i was just curious if votes for me were inspired by how long i've been here. i was just insecure.. like a man with a small penis should be.

[KeepingTheBlade]

lets just have lowridden do everyone one

[Lowridenn]

Ask and you shall recieve. Sorry these aren't in quite the detail I did above, but I am short on time.

TojesDolan - Above.
RunAmokRampant - Imagery was quite exquisite, and I am a sucker for imagery.
MMPR - Absolutely beautiful. It was tough to decide between you and RunAmok for first/second.
Dancin' Man - As others have said, the structure was the downfall.
Bowl of Oranges - I like the way the piece plays with a wax firgure. It is consistent, but a little bland.
SubtleDagger - Solid work, as always. It just didn't jump out and grab me like some of the others in this challange.
Pixiesfanyo - The imagery is outstanding. The piece just doesn't seem to affect me in the way some of the other pieces in this challange (as well as some of your other work) do.
ATC - Both of the "I want to..." stanzas were appealing to me. It was a fun read.
Silenceevolves - I actually really enjoyed this piece. It feels complete and makes perfect sense to me.
xKonradx - It seems mechanic. I can't feel any emotion in this at all.
Scared4Life - Above.
KeepingtheBlade - Some of the delivery seems a bit off. I did like the last stanza, but overall, it just didn't do it for me.
CrimsonPunk - Emotion that needs direction. Very clunky and contains some grammatical errors.

[Crimsonpunk]

Whats clunky, Awkward ?

[Dancin' Man]

Masterpiece Theater sounds like some sort of food. Like fancy TV dinners.

[TojesDolan]

Argh shoot...

It's been ovre a week already? :(

I forgot to edit... :(

I had it al ready, though.... I'm disqualified for the next one, right? :(

dammit.

[CSD & the Soul Machines]

Ooopsy, me too. I think I did quite well too, owell.

[SubtleDagger]

You probably would have won.

Someone tabulate votes, I'm in the mood for writing.

EDIT: Nevermind. Pix won.

pixies - 4 (7) 2 7 2 2 1 2 2 2 ; 24/9 = 2.667

[RunAmokRampant]

Damn it you beat me to it. Well here's the rest of the placings if you're interested.

TojesDolan DQ
RunAmokRampant 5.7 5th
MMPR DQ
Dancin' Man 10.4 10th
Bowl of Oranges 8 8th
SubtleDagger 3.1 2nd
Pixiesfanyo 2.7 1st
ATC 5.2 Equal 4th with Keepingtheblade
Silenceevolves 8.9 9th
xKonradx 6.7 6th
Lowridenn 7 7th
Scared4Life 4.4 3rd
KeepingtheBlade 5.2 Equal 4th with ATC
CrimsonPunk DQ

[SubtleDagger]

Yup.

Scarred should have won though. You dumbfaces.

[Crimsonpunk]

why the **** am i dq'd??

[SubtleDagger]

Because you didn't finish voting.

[pixiesfanyo]

hey see deez nuts.

[Crimsonpunk]

I assumed I didn't have to, as I did the same thing last time and no one said anything.

[SubtleDagger]

Hey, thanks for bring that to my attention.

Now you can't enter for two challenges!

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Oh no! That's four weeks out of your life you'll never get back.

[Crimsonpunk]

Hey, thanks for bring that to my attention.

Now you can't enter for two challenges!

At the back of my mind, I knew this was going to happen. Can't you just reserve a special last place for me one number below the amount of people that enter??

[SubtleDagger]

At the back of my mind, I knew this was going to happen. Can't you just reserve a special last place for me one number below the amount of people that enter??
No entering or I ban.

[xKONRADx]

Harsh.

[Crimsonpunk]

'Is silenced', Although considering the actual implications of a banning, it might be beneficial to me. Hmmm
Youv'e won this round, subtle ...