a song called tic tacs

[Sealey]

This is a song i wrote after a party bout febuary this year its an acoustic song just guitar, vox and a harmonica (very bob dyaln style)
i put the least amount of effort in it and even stole a line from bob dylans like a rolling stone but people seem to like it so its up to you guys i guess to tell me how crap it is (oh yeah its called tic tacs because three was a picture of tic tacs on the back of the paper i wrote it on)
but if for whatever reason its good..! i copyright it as of this minute!

verse one
theres been too many weeks that keep crawlin by
i know you wont stop to say hi
i know your heart has changed
if you lean your head out you might here the rain
chorus one
and im feeling just a little more blue
i know you feel the same too
never mind its too hard to say please
were dying in sweet harmony
-crack a harmonica solo!-
verse 2
make a wish by a witherin tree
some day, someday you'll see
ive been waiting beside the crowd
and you wont talk so loud
chorus 2
and im feeling just a little more down
my heart sank into the ground
nevermind its too hard to say please
were dying in sweet harmony
-crack another harmonica solo!-

so yeah its a short song but at the time i had a short temper! haha

[Sloth]

It actually feels like bob dylan. This is a fun little piece :thumb:

[Sealey]

thanks man bob dylan is the greatest lyricist in my opinion!
rock-tober rules!

[Nicktf69]

hey i liked nice flow and rhyming patterns so good job and i love bob dylan so.........:thumb: