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DeadReligion
10-22-2005, 04:07 AM
Just for a change for you guys, I'll put up a song about a relationship...lol. This wasn't really a personal experience, I just kind of wrote it. BTW, Billet-Doux means love letter.

Billet-doux

(Verse 1)
Congratulations,
On your sedulous evasion,
The wool was pulled, over my eyes,
As the saying goes,
Congratulations on, absconding me
Time we were together, went
By all so fast,
Now a minute,
Seems like an hour,
My will you did devour
This ain’t no goddamn billet-doux
(Verse 1 end)

(Verse 2)
Inveigher, attacks,
Words spill out of your mouth,
Like blood,
With blades on each end,
That stick into me
And hit my left carotid
Another punctured my aorta,
The last cut my lungs
And made them cave in
(Verse 2 end)

(Verse 3)
Living, in a tenebrous world,
Always in a tenebrous mood,
I just want this to end,
I never meant to offend,
We used to copulate,
Now we won’t even capitulate
This ain’t no billet-doux
(Verse 3)

(Outro)
Ain’t no billet-doux…anymore (X2)
(Outro end)

FA
10-22-2005, 04:11 AM
i'll get to this later, busy at the moment.

DeadReligion
10-22-2005, 01:43 PM
/bump, PLEASE CRIT.

Shady Ultima
10-22-2005, 02:48 PM
I like it!
There's a few words in there I'm definately gonna have to look up, but overall it's good! I like the message, from love to hatred, and I can relate, even though it isn't from your experience, I can understand where it comes from.

If you could crit mine - Exodus http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=405733