Tellus

[SomeGuySomewhere]

Tellus


This haunting winter, infinite to no end
So finite in structure, raw in its creation
As it springs forth the labor of lust
Black water from depths of immoral souls
A heart of gold, poisoned, tarnished
Death to the purity that once was
Broken unto this habit of corruption
Only deepening this ethereal hardship

A native specter, chilling ways
Haunting appeal, impure in divinity
Clashing humanities
One at incipience
Divergence from the path
Lost in thus created thicket
Recurring in sheltered minds
Peaking only to fall
The abyss awaiting victims
The worst is yet to aspirate

[Blue Light Special]

I cannot really see this being sung. It seems too broken up, the flow is somewhat weird. It also seems to bounce around in topics too much, a bit wordy?

[Somerandomguy]

I agree with blue light I can't see it being sung either. I see the first part more as just spoken word leading into a song

[SomeGuySomewhere]

Oh it deff can be sung, there's no doubt about that. The lyrics are dealing with the evils of the world Tellus the Roman goddess of the earth, equated with the Greek goddess Gaia, hence the name of the song. Hopefully that will help, because the lyrics are really are focused on one topic, you just have to see it in another perspective:thumb:

[MidnightHysteria]

I actually think the flow in the first stanza is better than that in the second.