This Came to me in Bio class...

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The Blessedly Damned

Watching eyes all around,
Just him versus society.
Treachory all abound,
Having to trust nobody?

Running, Running,
Looking for a haven.
Public Enemy number one
Using gifts no one gave him.

Where are your friends in this time of need?
Can't you please to me tell,
How does it feel,
To be damned in heaven and blessed in hell?

Not caring who comes and goes,
He never knows his only enemy.
For he is himself his own foe,
Being able to trust nobody.

Let someone in your world,
Because to yourself you're committing treason
By letting your ignorance
Get in the way of love.

So tell me, Bandit,
You can't be happy
As long as you are
Damned in heaven and blessed in hell?

[MidnightHysteria]

I like the part about the bandit because it reminds me of Johnny Quest.

But seriously, it's a pretty redundant work. You seem to be trying to expand a very short idea into a full-length piece, and having difficulty with it. I like the second stanza though because it best convyes the character's urgency.

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Like I said it came to me in Biology class... I just wanted to if anyone thought I could go somewhere with it...

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I edited it.