NO TITLE, opinions are welcome

[me and I]

cut to the chase:

I wish I'd hear your voice
The silence so deep
The sweet smell of your hair
Wish it was in the air

I'm hurting myself
These thoughts of hate
Won't never leave me
No room to breathe

I keep digging myself deeper
Deep down to hell
Though I reckon the problem
But just can't help me

The emotions are overwhelming
But I'm too numb to cry
I can't handle what's inside of me
I find no room for love, find no path

I can't find the answers
I find no solution
So I run like my father
I run with no life guarantee

[flywithdiamonds]

It's a sad story, you got a bit too wrapped up in the angst in my opinion and the wording didn't standard out and it definately needs a proof read.

"Won't never leave me" - sort out what you're trying to say there as it doesn't read right as it is.