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customerhatesmusic
10-02-2005, 01:11 PM
I wrote this song. Its a joke and I want it to be like the stereotypical streetpunk song. Its a joke ok?


Punx not dead
**** the system
oi oi oi

unite the punx
**** the system
oi oi oi

drink beer
**** the system
oi oi oi

we're poor
**** the system
oi oi oi

Kill the hippies
**** the system
oi oi oi

punx not dead
**** the system
oi oi oi
Nightvision
10-02-2005, 01:16 PM
Joke songs, as a rule, tend to suck.


This is a prime example of why.

It's not funny, it's not clever, and it's certainly not well-written.
Yppolitia
10-02-2005, 02:28 PM
I thought jokes were suppose to be funny.
Happy_Squirrel
10-02-2005, 02:30 PM
I liked the "Kill the Hippies" line. Made me laugh.

Other than that, *yawn*.

Oi Oi Oi.
fretfriend
10-02-2005, 02:31 PM
just sad
A_Perfect_Sonnet
10-02-2005, 02:32 PM
You should post this in the punk forum. BSLAT would love it.
customerhatesmusic
10-02-2005, 03:00 PM
Joke songs, as a rule, tend to suck.


This is a prime example of why.

It's not funny, it's not clever, and it's certainly not well-written.


its not supposed to be funny. I used the wrong weord, not joke. what is the word I'm looking for?
customerhatesmusic
10-02-2005, 03:02 PM
I shortened it, i think it was a little too long.
customerhatesmusic
10-02-2005, 03:03 PM
It's not funny, it's not clever, and it's certainly not well-written.

exactly, thats why its a street punk song, Take any streetpunk song for example and everything you said applys to it.
braindoctor
10-02-2005, 03:05 PM
I thought jokes were suppose to be funny.

i think he's workin on the punch-line.....................
customerhatesmusic
10-02-2005, 07:58 PM
up teh punx!!!
Brain Toad
10-02-2005, 10:08 PM
Didn't the Casualties already write this?