Check out some songs by my band

[v00do0 BaStaRd]

APOLOGY: Sorry I was a bit tired last night so I ended up posting this topic in the wrong forum. Hopefully I won't get a stream of "you posted this topic twice that wont make more people listen just annoy them" comments.

http://www.myspace.com/clockworkangst

Criticism is most welcome. Also, if you want to slag off the music feel free, I'm just interested in seeing what people think on a whole.

I am aware that the singing is bad (for example in the fourth track), but that was done by a weaker vocalist who is no longer in the band.

[Jilm21]

Just so you know your link didn't work

[GDan]

Just so you know your link didn't work

Modify it in the top bar.

[sliver]

It's not bad, better than anything I've heard in the audio arena today. The piano in "My War" was pretty cool... was expecting it to be a sort of dark epic but was disapointed when the vocals came in and ruined the atmosphere.

In general the band is tight, you know what you guys are doing and it shows. What I would concentrate on is the songwriting which is the bands weakness. The vocal melodies don't have anything that grabs your attentions and makes you want to sing along. EXCEPT the begining vocals of the song "Break Me" but it sounds like its another girl singer cameo-ing in the song.

[v00do0 BaStaRd]

Yes it does... you just needed to type the address in your browser. If you clicked on it for some reason it puts the musicianforums URL before it, which obviously wasnt the address given in my post so you could of just typed the address in yourself. Anyway, I've put http:\\ before it now which seems to stop the problem.

[LD50]

I thought "my war" was a little Van halen-ish, the vocals reminded me of some eighties band like Duran Duran or something, but what do I know? I think it needed vocals though, instrumentals are a little bit of a bore. I think the vocals worked, so I am in a little bit of a disagreement with the man up there.

The third one with the female vox was a little different, not a fan of it, but I`m a bad judge of songs with girls singing, I`m told I`m too picky, but there are very few female lead singers I like, I just prefer a guy up front and girls in the back, sorry. The guitar was great by the way.

The fourth was "too British" for me, but again, I`m an old school rock kinda guy, so don`t take me too seriously!

My favorite was PC dependancy. clearly a song that can relate to anyone, no matter what their tastes. Catchy lyrics, good chorus. Nice job.

-cheers!

[v00do0 BaStaRd]

Thanks for the feedback guys, keep it coming.

[v00do0 BaStaRd]

bumpies

[Axem Black]

Intro to My War = cool, vocals =/= cool.
Overall good though.

[Senor_Whippy]

I'll be honest with you I hated it (My War:2/10) but if I ever meet you in the streets i'll give you a big hug and buy you a beer just because you had the balls to put the words Pop Punk and Experimental in the same sentence (Balls Rating:11/10).