"Wash Away" demo, check mine and ill check yours

[September]

Heres a song I just recorded called Wash Away, its still poor quality. I get my better recording equipment soon and so it will sound clearer. In the mean time tell me what you think.

http://www.purevolume.com/dawl

[Rayne264]

counting to 7's singing wasnt good at all, so i changed it 15seconds in.

by the way needs something else, the original song is good, but on acoustic it sounds like the same thing over and over, and i think you played a part 100x too many, it took forever to really get into lyrics. and you sing the exact same thing over and over, its just a **** cover. and once again, the vocals sucked.


wash away is so repetitive, you must have said "wash away" 20 times in the first minute. its a boring song, horrible lyrics, and emotionless singing.


try to play acoustic songs like dave grohl, with emotion and lyrics that arent so crappy.