Broken

[shadow120]

Broken

I layed quietly,
Right beside you.

You tried to whisper to me,
But i ignored you.

Why can't, We make it work?
Why can't, We give it a try?
Because if i love you, and you love i?
Because without you, I'd rather die...

Light blue eyes, Long dark hair,
But you'll never-ever know, How much i care...

I don't care, When you lie to me,
Things'll never turn out, How i want them to be...

Why can't, We make it work?
Why can't, We give it a try?
Because if i love you, and you love i?
Because without you, I'd rather die...

(You think its the same,
But its realy different,
You think i feel the way everyone else does,
But i don't...
You think i'm nothing special,
But i truely am,
You think i don't love you
But i do..)

I think about you all the time,
I can't live without you...

If you have any love for me at all,
Please...Make this love true...

Why can't, We make it work?
Why can't, We give it a try?
Because if i love you, and you love i?
Because without you, I'd rather die...

[MidnightHysteria]

I know how you feel, man. You meet this great girl, and you really really like her, but she doesn't seem to notice you, so you write her a song and... all you can do is spout clichés. I really don't mean to make it sound like I'm just categorically bashing you. I have this problem with love songs too. Still, with powerful enough music, this could definitely get the girl.

[APS]

So the real question here is... will all these terrible songs you posted be closed, or just two of them?

[EmergencyRoom2]

So the real question here is... will all these terrible songs you posted be closed, or just two of them?

:lol:

You could take Simon Cowell's place on American Idol. :thumb:

[cowboy_from_hell]

really man what were you thinking when you wrote this?? Was it by any chance i'll pull peices of crap out my ***???

[shadow120]

Hey im back, Funnily enough, this song wasn't written by me, it was written by the drummer in our band, the song is very hard to understand without the right music, its the kind of song where none of it makes sense on its own, but when the music is added, it sounds pretty good, the part in red is screamed, i'm the lead singer, so i have to sing the rest, i can assure you this song makes a hell of alot more sense when sung with the right music...

[Dingbats]

Because if i love you, and you love i?

It's you love me, not I.

[shadow120]

We tried it with me, it didn't work...