Love2Lust
09-12-2005, 12:10 AM
I've been working on some more western/spanish sounding guitar songs, and this is my latest. I like it, it might read weird if not read right...but I have no way to convey the right way haha. Long like most of my songs, and its playing around with some repetition and rhyming...anyways I hope you like...you know the C4C deal...thanks ladies and gent's.
Oh yeah and I'm really in search for a good title, so far the only one I've liked is 'The Smoking 6', any suggestions will be good!
The legions fall,
you've heard it all,
every man has come before you,
They walked so tall,
before they saw what was to become of them,
what has become of them?
You spin your 6 like its something new,
'liberating' every man you slew,
But you just don't care anymore,
Faith is not there, anymore,
Six shots as the bodies drop,
you said,
'Draw once before the end',
(one shot til the end)
The thoughts flew through your mind but you saw them to the end,
now you're dead,
You tip your hat,
a ghostly town,
no one is seen, no one around anymore,
What have you done,
1 bullet it left in this gun now,
Six shots as the bodies drop,
you said,
'Draw once before the end',
(one shot til the end)
The thoughts flew through your mind but you saw them to the end,
now you're dead,
Town to town you will reveal,
a story of which every man will hear until,
you reach the end,
You found your love in a triggers click,
and you,
waited for the sound,
You looked for death in a triggers click,
and you,
heard none around,
But its ix shots as the bodies drop,
and you said,
'Draw once before the end',
(one shot til the end)
The thoughts flew through your mind but you saw them to the end,
now you're dead.
Oh yeah and I'm really in search for a good title, so far the only one I've liked is 'The Smoking 6', any suggestions will be good!
The legions fall,
you've heard it all,
every man has come before you,
They walked so tall,
before they saw what was to become of them,
what has become of them?
You spin your 6 like its something new,
'liberating' every man you slew,
But you just don't care anymore,
Faith is not there, anymore,
Six shots as the bodies drop,
you said,
'Draw once before the end',
(one shot til the end)
The thoughts flew through your mind but you saw them to the end,
now you're dead,
You tip your hat,
a ghostly town,
no one is seen, no one around anymore,
What have you done,
1 bullet it left in this gun now,
Six shots as the bodies drop,
you said,
'Draw once before the end',
(one shot til the end)
The thoughts flew through your mind but you saw them to the end,
now you're dead,
Town to town you will reveal,
a story of which every man will hear until,
you reach the end,
You found your love in a triggers click,
and you,
waited for the sound,
You looked for death in a triggers click,
and you,
heard none around,
But its ix shots as the bodies drop,
and you said,
'Draw once before the end',
(one shot til the end)
The thoughts flew through your mind but you saw them to the end,
now you're dead.