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IbanezSamurai
09-11-2005, 06:40 PM
This is my latest recording, sorry for the bad quality.

http://ibanezsamurai.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/251014/.0509748b/stream.m3u

Ps. At about 1:45 there is an annoying beep that I am trying to get rid of.
IbanezSamurai
09-11-2005, 07:21 PM
yeah... I need some comments
IbanezSamurai
09-11-2005, 08:50 PM
bump
pyro2312
09-12-2005, 01:59 PM
the link to your song doesnt work
hedgefudge420
09-12-2005, 02:01 PM
yes the link is a horrible link that doesnt work like he said!
IbanezSamurai
09-12-2005, 03:07 PM
http://ibanezsamurai.dmusic.com/
Rayne264
09-12-2005, 04:30 PM
awake is so boring id rather piss on my leg and watch it dry
IbanezSamurai
09-12-2005, 08:34 PM
awake is so boring id rather piss on my leg and watch it dry


Well, I admit your honesty, can you give an advice on how to make it sound better?
Rayne264
09-12-2005, 09:35 PM
i forgot what you song was, and i cant seem to listen to it again, so il just say this in general.

all songs need a hook, could be powerful lyrics, a voice with raw emotion (dave grohl for example), or just a simple yet infectious guitar rhythm.
labgnat
10-12-2005, 03:51 AM
that was pretty decent i think. awake i mean. way better than most stuff i've heard on here, the recording was quite clean. a bit repetitive tho. the solo was nice tho. just add another part or 2 to it and it's great. the more songs u write the better they get. it's much easier to get better at things by doing them over and over than to get worse.