The whole dam world

[Pavlo]

note- more of a metal/alternative instrumental... I like to use words sparingly but purposefully :wave: :

With a cynic thought
Defiled her; uncaught
Laughed it off and all had been forgotten.

Isn’t good to hide
All your hurts inside;
Remorse for those who love abusers.

He told her his disgust
For denying him his lust.
What the hell?
That crazy mother-****er.

In self defense she pleads
“Please take me back I need
The cruelty of your hand;
I’m crazy, yes I am.”

The whole dam world is crazy
’Whole dam world is crazy
’Whole dam world is crazy, yes I am.

[Pavlo]

:O wanted to know something to.... for the first stanza I mostly used unstressed or shortly stressed words except for the word 'forgotten' so that the stanza would go by fast but the word 'forgotten' would be remembered..... did the first one appear faster to anyone? :P

[TojesDolan]

OK I'll do this but give me a few seconds to go get water and rest, OK?

*Black dot*

[guitar321]

**** thats good man, jeeze i wish i could write songs, that song would be perfect for my band haha good job i really like it :thumb:

[Pavlo]

:chug: Ty , and I wish I had a band :(