Dreams

[El_Goodo]

Dream

Close your eyes and dream away,
Tell yourself you’ll change the world,
Never lose sight of your dream,
And yea I think you could change the world
And after all dreams are what this world is made of

Chorus
So keep on dreaming,
Little boy,
Keep on dreaming,
Little girl,
Yea…
Someday your gonna change the world

Open your eyes and see the world,
Tell yourself you’re gonna make a difference,
Never lose the fire in your eyes,
And yea I think you could make a difference,
And after all what’s life without an occasional surprise

Chorus
So keep dreaming,
Little boy,
Keep on dreaming,
Little girl,
Yea…
Someday your gonna change the world

Bridge:
Close one eye and keep the other open,
So you can see your world and the real together,
Someday your gonna see your world is right in front of you

Chorus 2
So keep dreaming,
Little boy,
Keep on dreaming,
Little girl,
Yea…
Someday your gonna change the world

Close your eyes and dream away,
Tell yourself you’ll change the world,
Never lose sight of your dream,
And yea I think you could change the world
And after all dreams are what this world is made of

Chorus
So keep dreaming,
Little boy,
Keep on dreaming,
Little girl,
Yea…
Someday your gonna change the world
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I think it's very Lennonish...I wrote it along time ago. But i've decided to post it up here. Im thinking of trying to write some piano for it... (im a guitarist). But I fool around on the piano all the time and I can usually come up with stuff.

[Disturbed]

dude, i like it. the chorus is good and rhymes. and the bridge is cool too. nice.

[MidnightHysteria]

I can't tell if this is cynical/facetious or not. Lines that start with "tell yourself" make it seem like it is, but most of the rest of it is rather ambiguous on that point.

[El_Goodo]

I can't tell if this is cynical/facetious or not. Lines that start with "tell yourself" make it seem like it is, but most of the rest of it is rather ambiguous on that point.

I understood everything you just said....



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[Up The Irons]

it's very Beatles, i really llike it

[Brokensticks]

I like it but doesn't posting it on here give the risk of it being stolen?

[Love2Lust]

I like it but doesn't posting it on here give the risk of it being stolen?

not unless someone is an *** enough to do it...and if you date your material and everything, especially if you hand write it, its considered yours...legally at least.


I loved it very beatles-esque (at least lennon-ish) as Irons said...it has the makings of a country song if you ask me, or a soft rock...very nice either way. I have to give it a 8/10 well written, well thought, and varied from most songs around here!

I'd give it a better crit but I gotta go finish up some laundry for tomorrow haha...I hope this gets good crits from others...GL!

[Oleg]

I like these lyrics. It has some positive vibe. Unlike other gloomy and pessimistic stuff around here.