The reapers touch

[priest]

this is some song i wrote a while back. it isn't very long, but who knows i guess it coud be a slow song. i think at the time i was listening to some Cannibal Corpse and Six feet Under. tell me what you think.


I’m dead
Slowly decay
My heart stops
My breath fades away
My skin is blue
Blood is cold
Maggots crawl
My body is mold
Crows pick at my face
Vultures circle my soul
The reaper says it is now time to go

[Hardrockguitardude16]

What you've written is alrite but it needs more to be a song

[Crimsonpunk]

What he said.
Dance, little dude, Dance!!