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Love2Lust
08-23-2005, 01:42 AM
More of a fun song of mine, no real point, its not meant to be special, I just got bored and wrote it up lol, so dont take it seriously, hell I could care less if it got critted...just sharing it lol :thumb:

(oh and dont tell me how crappy the 3rd from last verse is...I know already lol, againthis was for fun...)

Manhunt

I heard her scream,
a bloodshrilling howl,
it turned over the eyes,
to a vision so foul,

A woman with a blade,
soaked deep in blood,
pulled from beneath the covers,
and out of the one she loved,

Have I done the deed,
I cant remember it seems,
did I kill this man,
hell I know thats how it seems,

Chances are I did him in,
another vodka stained thoughtless sin,
murder is nothing compared to the hurt,
The hurt I brought to the wife of this jerk,

I remember him saying I was just a punk,
god knows we were both innocent drunks,

but the blade found his chest,
and my hand was on the handle,
the story will be put to rest,
as I run out of ammo,

I fight off the red and blue,
the lights cause my fear,
I think I could make it out,
with one more bullet and a beer,

I count whats left in the clip that runs near dry,
3 more rounds left, only 16 shy,
I could have dropped them all,
even as they broke my door,
but I chose to run for cover,
and dove to the bottom floor,

The glass shattered around me,
I felt it peirce my skin,
a pure burning sensation,
but I had to keep it in,

The cops were on my tail,
19 men were chasing,
surely one would die,
and surely guns would be blazing,

I ran across my old car,
keys sat within,
Broke through the window,
and pulled myself within,

The ignition started promptly,
the shots did ring loud,
I felt the burning once again,
and saw a dark red cloud,

The darkness overwhelmed me,
and I sat against the wheel,
in the distance a car's horn blaring,
the end of a mans ordeal.

jade858907
08-23-2005, 07:38 PM
Swing! Purty cool bud, this was bursting with lavish detail! Love the story, but how do you intend to make it a song, if this was any idea in your head. I liked it man! My “band” touched up that song ‘Pinned’ Check it out for me? Thanx ~jade

Love2Lust
08-23-2005, 10:01 PM
yeah np, I'll check it out. I dunno if its gonna be a song, its just out there for now, just something fun lol...but I'll check out yours now!