kiarash212
08-22-2005, 02:41 PM
Alright well this is my first time doing one of this. I'm 15 and I'm in a band, I wrote these lyrics a bit ago and I want to get some actual feedback on it, thanks.
Day by day
These couple go by
Using fictional words
Rhymed with lies
Interesting, how caring one can be
with the light on, look at me
There are places just as sweet
To be noticed affectuous
False intimacy, just between you and me
It's not contagious unless you want it to be
There is no default way in living your life
We all reach for the secret place
There is no default way in living your life
Oh
You're right
Were trying to ruin your life
We'll leave you alone now
Interesting, how cruel one can be
With the lights out
At least it was fun right?
There is no default way in living your life
We all reach for the secret place
There is no default way in living your life
So just go with the flow
Day by day
These couple go by
Using fictional words
Rhymed with lies
Interesting, how caring one can be
with the light on, look at me
There are places just as sweet
To be noticed affectuous
False intimacy, just between you and me
It's not contagious unless you want it to be
There is no default way in living your life
We all reach for the secret place
There is no default way in living your life
Oh
You're right
Were trying to ruin your life
We'll leave you alone now
Interesting, how cruel one can be
With the lights out
At least it was fun right?
There is no default way in living your life
We all reach for the secret place
There is no default way in living your life
So just go with the flow