InMe
08-21-2005, 04:40 PM
Here are some of my latest lyrics, please feel free to crit and comment on them. My lines are shorted to usual as most people have said they dont flow to well. The way the lyrics can flow is something that ive looked so please comment on that as well please. Thanks very much.
Lonely Room
The cold phases
Of no compassion
Pass through my body
And feelings each day
My words await the actions
Written for this script
As i step back to the otherside
And await for you to come to me
The waiting frames me
And im sentenced to the lonely room
No agreements with myself can be met
And kept
But my passion will see me through
An addict to be alone
But i hate it so much
Giving up on this
Would be changing the way i am
The pictures taken soak themselves
And flow down the river
As the loneliness
Needs to pass me by
The waiting frames me
And im sentenced to the lonely room
No agreements with myself can be met
And kept
But my passion will see me through
Charging for any chosen soul
That appeals to my senses
But guard yourself
Protect and defend against the evil
Allow entry to one
Only one
The waiting frames me
And im sentenced to the lonely room
No agreements with myself can be met
And kept
But my passion will see me through
Lonely Room
The cold phases
Of no compassion
Pass through my body
And feelings each day
My words await the actions
Written for this script
As i step back to the otherside
And await for you to come to me
The waiting frames me
And im sentenced to the lonely room
No agreements with myself can be met
And kept
But my passion will see me through
An addict to be alone
But i hate it so much
Giving up on this
Would be changing the way i am
The pictures taken soak themselves
And flow down the river
As the loneliness
Needs to pass me by
The waiting frames me
And im sentenced to the lonely room
No agreements with myself can be met
And kept
But my passion will see me through
Charging for any chosen soul
That appeals to my senses
But guard yourself
Protect and defend against the evil
Allow entry to one
Only one
The waiting frames me
And im sentenced to the lonely room
No agreements with myself can be met
And kept
But my passion will see me through