something to easy your aching hearts

[coheneran]

apparently political lyrics of the punk genre is uncool, because i don't see any. what is it with moody lyrics about death and love and joan jett rip-offs. so here's a little lyric i wrote while waiting for a flight to the UK from vienna on my way back from israel. god i hate vienna. havent even been out of the airport and i know i hate vienna. rip off ****ing euro-adapting cunts of mothers.
well, this song's about the unfairness of society when dealing with gays bis and all inbetween and about the general heterosexist inequality in the system, even from openly anti-homophobic persons. and it's aimed at those who don't like the idea, so a bad crit might be good, we'll see. it's called Save Sodomy.

lets not take these anymore
heterosexist inclinations
from the leaders of out nations
fight like wild
yeah oscar wilde
and sodomise sodomise sodomise

sodomise the boss
sodomise your teacher
do your missus anally
and sodomise the preacher

whats this expensive crap on my tv?
not to my liking what i see
shaven pussies right and left
but not a prick in sight
this is theft
anallus horribilus is what the queen said
well as a bi i enjoy getting laid

sodomise the boss
sodomise your teacher
do your missus anally
and sodomise the preacher

[coheneran]

bump
this is worth at least a post

[coheneran]

bumpbumpbump
it will not stop.

[Crimsonpunk]

This deserves points for originality if nothing else, with music it would be kinda cool, it's fairly well written and attention grabbing, and your trying to get a point across without thought to what others may think, which to me is one of the main things that punk is about.
If you have the time, crit mine 'stop, drop and roll honey'

[coheneran]

thanks. i will.

[leg of eel]

political lyrics of the punk genre are definately cool. [as long as it's real punk...but nonetheless, political lyrics are good no matter what.] this is a good subject, i don't think i've heard much about it in music. it's pretty well written. the wild/wilde wasn't the strongest point in the song, if you change that or something it might be better. otherwise this was good. 7.5/10

[coheneran]

thanks man