Vulnerable

[Synesthesia_RC43]

Its cut down from the original to make it feel less cluttered and to make way for my need to throw guitar solos in songs lol. **** greedy guitarist jk. but id like crit on the lyrics because im not sure if people can make since of it. once i record the vocals the song will be in the audio arena if your interested. thnx.



Vulnerable

I'll take apologies,cus I fear to be alone,
I'll forget all my strength, cus your smiles just like a gun,

Its so strange I even care,
Its so strange I even care,

why do I feel so shaken,heart broken soft spoken,
and disarmed by your cry,(soft oh oh's) or is that mine?
I'd love to think that this betrayal was just a test trust,
but i'm not sure if loves trust test would be given with way of lust,

Its so strange to even care,
Its so strange to even care,

can I disguise this as love?
can I disguise this as love?
can I disguise this as love?
can I disguise this as love?

[Atom Heart mother]

I never saw the original but by the short length it think it might be a little short, theres really only 8 lines if you look at this from a dofferent perspective but i do like the lyrics and i might check it out if you record it. 7/10