new short song, plz crit me

[groomits]

I played the drums and the guit. It was also my first time singing.. The song is Let Me, so plz crit

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/9/dmax_music.htm

[Malakian Worshipper]

that was a sweet little tune. i like it coz the singing doesnt have to be good for that to be enjoyable.:thumb: but the only downside is the audio clipping.
i really want someone to check my song out. you wanna?http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=389980

[groomits]

thanks man, and I'd like it if you could put your song in another topic...

But your song is great too, it would be better with vocals though. because its a little too repetitive. but the guitars are nice, great job.