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crag
08-15-2005, 06:28 AM
This is a song i wrote months ago and decided to revamp it. It still needs bass but i'll do that some other time when i can get a hold of one.

anyway could y'all give it a listen and give me a few pointers?

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=352308

hedgefudge420
08-15-2005, 01:59 PM
sounds too much like iron maiden for me. Iron Maiden rox my sox...but I dont knoe that your music would go anywhere cause we arent in the 80`s anymore...but i know how it is...im stuck in the 90`s and modern music sucks

mikethecoug
08-15-2005, 02:32 PM
More like jewish music

hedgefudge420
08-15-2005, 02:39 PM
More like jewish music
yes.... :lol: lol

crag
08-17-2005, 05:36 AM
so is that all there is to say about the song- that it sounds like Iron Maiden and jewish music?

Trim vs. the System
08-17-2005, 06:17 AM
pretty much. the solo sounds a bit bi-tonal to me. and you really need some real drums...and bass.........and vocals.

crag
08-18-2005, 03:34 PM
pretty much. the solo sounds a bit bi-tonal to me. and you really need some real drums...and bass.........and vocals.
yeah, i'm afraid i have no way of getting real drums as i know no drummers. As i said before bass will be added when i can get one and i'm no good at writing meaningful lyrics :upset: