[Acoustic] Give a Listen, it would be appreciated greatly

[FaKie]

http://www.purevolume.com/crossingmaple

Be harsh, be honest, I just want some feedback, anything will be appreciated
I need help working on my singing

There are some places where I'm off key, but I just don't realize it (since listening to yourself sing and actually picking it apart is really hard..for me at least).

Thanks in advance

[Readaz]

That was a beautifull song, and i think the fact you play and sing and the same time is realy great, the playing was very good and the song flowed great, the singing was good, but theres room for improvment, but its hard to concentrate on vocals when your playing guitar i know. As for the lyrics they seemed good, but i couldnt make them out all of the time. Quality was also good, keep up the good work.