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P.rocker
08-06-2005, 12:35 AM
It's been awhile yes it has, but I'm back. Thought I'd revisit for old times sake and just throw a song in here. Any old people rmember me at all? Oh well...this song is called "Gateway to our Purgatory".

I'm so **** mad and glad at the same time
Cut you up your blood stained my shirt
No it didn't hurt, but you'll be feeling it in the morning
A mourning at a funeral, have I told you your beautiful
I'm sorry I really meant to make it painless, but my hands slipped and I lost my grip

So sorry that your dead
It's my fault so I was mislead
It was wrong yet I didn't care
It got me more excited when I saw your fear
What is wrong with me I say
Perhaps I need a little white room for me to go stay
Moment to Moment I feel myself fade away

The truth is shocking and revealing at the same time
Parts of you I really like and others I found sublime
No time to explain no time to write my memoirs
Simply accept what I've done and there's no evidence cause I blew up the car
Forgive me God I'm simply a lunatic in a divine way
No last words for me before I go
You live your own life is what they and I choose to live mine this way

Yeah this song is I guess about a psychopath who figures out that he is crazy and how he gets the feel from doing it and he is already to far gone to be saved. Well later!

ozzfest05
08-06-2005, 04:26 PM
sounds like a pretty sick song, some rhymes seem forced, lacks flow in some parts also , you kept the overall idea though so good job.

crit mine i have a few