Insane

[ced321]

Hey this is the 1st song ive written so dont be 2 harsh!! im jus looking for constuctive crit to say how i can improve. if u want me 2 crit ures just say. Thx

I’m drifting into outer space
Amongst the stars feel outta place
Don’t know where im going to
How I wish I only knew

Fell in a black hole of despair
It damaged my soul beyond repair
Now im lost in the stratosphere
Looking for a way outta here

‘Cause In the dark im goin insane
Crazy sparks enlighten my brain
This trip is causin’ me so much pain
Feelin so caught up in chains

I’m verging on insanity
Lost all sense of gravity
Looking for my direction
In this life for my protection

‘Cause In the dark im goin insane
Crazy sparks enlighten my brain
This trip is causin’ me so much pain
Now I know this is all in vain

And im spinning round and round
My feet don’t touch the ground
Im fallin back to earth
This is my rebirth

‘Cause In the dark I am sane
Crazy sparks brighten my brain
This trip aint causing no more pain
Now its time to go again

Ive come to realise
The fun of life is in surprise
Of not knowin what coming next
No longer am I perplexed
And I don’t know where im going
But whats the fun in knowing?