My Song .. Give Suggestions

[Kurt Cobain- Nirvana]

Here's my song..didnt take to long to do though.


Verse Not Again, get out of my face
You bug me so much, you act like this is some race
I'm not looking for you, so stop looking for a reason
It just ain't easy, just stop believing


Chorus What's the reason
Stop Believing X 2
Look at me
Ain't this easy?

Verse You're another liar, another sick cold hearted person
But that's why you have no reason, don't look surprised
Because I don't care
To be fully truthful your like a medicine with no cure

Chorus What's the reason
Stop believing X 2
Look at me
Ain't this easy

Bridge Oh no, here it goes, stop complaining
And stop believing
Believing X 6

Well that's the song..tell me what ya think or dont like or w.e :lol:

[czGLoRy]

is it supposed to be rap? I really didn't like it it didnt have any rhythm or rhyme of anything really

I really didnt like it.

Honestly

[PunkyMcEmo]

heres a suggestion: dont write crap lyrics like that.

this doesnt really have a point, rhyme, or flow.
and it doesnt even look like you tried.

[ozzfest05]

i dont really know what u were trying to say, or even wut you were thinking when you wrote it, but im guessing you werent thinking at all. basically im agreeing with PunkyMcEmo..

[SMOK3]

heres a suggestion: dont write crap lyrics like that.

this doesnt really have a point, rhyme, or flow.
and it doesnt even look like you tried.

Wow... I am gone for a month and everyone has turned into a$sholes :confused: Well, how about constructive criticism from now on

[Behind Zildjians]

you guys are ****ing dickholes... you couldnt write better ****... retards