Please Crit my song

[Wiggles222]

This song is about beer ( i can't really spell so sue me)

CH: Beer Beer Berr hey x3

V1:

im wasted
im in my island
i couldn't stop thinking
about beer
its too late
for her to calme me
i've been drinking
i have no fear

so if you wanna let me go
(go let me go) x2
i know

repeat chorus

V2

now i've found
my way
i need to get some
beer today
like a puppy
i adore
my buyers
at the liquore store

so if you want to let me drink
(drink let me drink) X2
i know
(Bullets yells solo)

Chorus

and i know
that i might have
diarea in the morning
but thats a
chane
i'll take

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Why people like you even bother writing confounds me.

[morrissey]

That's pretty ****ing awesome for such a **** song.

98%

[Wiggles222]

why thankyou the kids always like it when we play it

[morrissey]

why thankyou the kids always like it when we play it
I'm glad we're raising the next generation well.