Counterfeit

[aerialrevenge]

Just a beginning. Tell me what you think. The chords are Em F# F for the verse lines, and i haven't gotten into it any deeper.

Verse
Don't lie to me, it's not the company you keep
Dont try to be, only the rewareds that you reap.
With each remark, you stamp yourself a counterfeit.
Why can't you see, no one else even gives a *flip*

Bridge or maybe chorus
Forgive yourself-for what life's dealt-and start over again
Believe me now, you're more then you pretend

[Gypsy Campervan]

Write the whole thing and then post.

[aerialrevenge]

Write the whole thing and then post.

I do this to see if the song is worth finishing, so an actual crit, or just your opinion would have done the job. :thumb: