Iron_Weed
08-04-2005, 05:00 AM
Ok I wrote this crazy sequel to Jimmy was a Superhero. If it were an album this would come straight after that song, with weird slightly menacing music and semi free flowing lyrics. Haha, not sure how I feel about this so crit away.
Suddenly
Jimmy’s arch nemesis Steve
Who was a superfiend
Of lawful qualities
Approached Jimmy
With a smile of victory
And said to Jimmy
Jimmy, you are under arrest
For flying whilst under the influence
Of psychedelic drugs
And Jimmy’s hands were cuffed
By an evil device crafted of Jimmy’s one weakness
Reality
Welcome to
The lair
Of Steve
And many other superfiends!
I’m afraid
There’s no way
For you to escape
This time, Jimmy!
For you are trapped
In a subterranean
Discharger!
With walls
Closing in on you
More and more each second!
How will Jimmy escape?
Stay tuned
Next week
For the shocking conclusion!
And then on the next episode
As audiences
Excitedly waited for Jimmy’s adventures
And just after the Jimmy theme song had played
And the narrator, reassessed
Jimmy’s dire situation
We found Jimmy still had one strip of acid left
Which he had concealed from Steve
Secretly
And he flew
And he blew
All the superfiends
Back to California!
Where they all set up
Small firms
So they could one day have enough money
To rebuild a secret lair
And Jimmy had saved the day again
And fulfilled the expectations
That someone who chooses
To watch the Jimmy the Superhero show
Would wish fulfilled!
Suddenly
Jimmy’s arch nemesis Steve
Who was a superfiend
Of lawful qualities
Approached Jimmy
With a smile of victory
And said to Jimmy
Jimmy, you are under arrest
For flying whilst under the influence
Of psychedelic drugs
And Jimmy’s hands were cuffed
By an evil device crafted of Jimmy’s one weakness
Reality
Welcome to
The lair
Of Steve
And many other superfiends!
I’m afraid
There’s no way
For you to escape
This time, Jimmy!
For you are trapped
In a subterranean
Discharger!
With walls
Closing in on you
More and more each second!
How will Jimmy escape?
Stay tuned
Next week
For the shocking conclusion!
And then on the next episode
As audiences
Excitedly waited for Jimmy’s adventures
And just after the Jimmy theme song had played
And the narrator, reassessed
Jimmy’s dire situation
We found Jimmy still had one strip of acid left
Which he had concealed from Steve
Secretly
And he flew
And he blew
All the superfiends
Back to California!
Where they all set up
Small firms
So they could one day have enough money
To rebuild a secret lair
And Jimmy had saved the day again
And fulfilled the expectations
That someone who chooses
To watch the Jimmy the Superhero show
Would wish fulfilled!