Please Crit!! Untitled Song I like it so far

[Whatsisface]

Hey guys this is something I wrote a few days ago in about 20 minutes
Basically inspired by people's thought's and opinions about me, and my own opinions about myself.. well enjoy it, it's just my second "real" song. i'm looking for some advice for a little bridge of some sort, if anyone can help. Thanks!

Verse 1
Would you put up with me?
So careless and carefree.
Looking for time,
And something to occupy it.
My underbelly trust,
Utterly what I lust.
Impassively enraged,
You'll love or hate it.

Chorus
I'm organizing all my needs,
In all the wrong orders it seems.
Obnoxiously loved, and push has come to shove,
I make a plan to stand, but all I do is sit.

Verse 2
I'm not mad at you,
I just don't fit your shoes,
It's not a fashion show,
So dress up your mind.
Don't dedicate your life,
To other people's thoughts.
Swallow your pride but
Spit out your conscience.

Chorus
I'm organizing all my needs,
In all the wrong orders it seems.
Obnoxiously loved, and push has come to shove,
I make a plan to stand, but all I do is sit.

[Matn]

Verse 1
Would you put up with me?
So careless and carefree.
Looking for time,
And something to occupy it.
My underbelly trust,
Utterly what I lust.
Impassively enraged,
You'll love or hate it.

I like the imagery here.. although it's hard to picture a nice flow without music to go with it.. I'm sure you have something cool in mind ^^

Chorus
I'm organizing all my needs,
In all the wrong orders it seems.
*Obnoxiously loved, and push has come to shove*,
I make a plan to stand, but all I do is sit.

I'm not sure I understand everything here.. esp. the line marked with * But otherwise.. It's nice

Verse 2
I'm not mad at you,
I just don't fit your shoes,
It's not a fashion show,
So dress up your mind.
Don't dedicate your life,
To other people's thoughts.
Swallow your pride but
Spit out your conscience.

I like the last two lines really ^^ They really fit the theme of the song..

So generally speaking, it's a nice song. Maybe you could get some more rhyming in there.. not much right now.. But maybe that'll **** things up.. oh well.. Nice anyway ^^