first song need crit

[Taking You Back]

ok i wrote this song after my girlfriend dumped me for some jackass so if it sounds a little sappy plz forgive

im waiting for you
trying to call but you dont answer
why did you have to leave me here
so cold and alone

(chorus)
what is there to see
what is there to love
havnt i given you everything you;d ever need
isnt it just to bad that we werent meant to be

showing all i can
closing on your hand
trying to tell you that im the one

you look away
i made the mistake
of thinkin that you had the heart to show me love

(chorus)

now that its all said and done
who was left in the cold
who who was left alone
he said he could be your man
that he'd do everything he can
but did he even try to hide her from you

(bridge)
(chorus)x2