untitled song, please crit

[nonamemadox]

Me and my band wrote this, tell me what you think,

Idont wanna know you
your always fake
I never wanna see you
your always the same
I wish I could beleive you
but your always fake
I wont ever need you
cause your always the same

When I see you hates all around
I just wanna see you hit the ground
You'll never get up you awfull friend
It's better like this in the end

I dont care about you
anymore
I wanna see you
walk out that door
It's a nightmare
not a fantasie
Things are broken
between you and me

[EmoMagnum]

Ok..To say something. Its really generic. Theres really nothing to separate it from anything else. It rhymes well, but the word usage is really basic and uninteresting. Also, Is that all of it? Cause you need more work on it because its really short.

Heres Mine--> http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=368601

[forgotton fire]

emomagnum is right. it's a little too generic and needs to be longer. dont get me wrong, i liked it, but still...7/10...just because i like it.
crit mine at
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?p=8814983#post8814983

[nonamemadox]

im not exactly shure what generic means...

[PunkSkater163]

I thought it was a preatty good song, It was'nt like holy ****! that was ****ing amazing! but it was good. I liked it. Thiers really nothing you can do to edit it, so I can't really give much suggestions. I give it a 7 or 8/10. Keep working man, the song had a great idea, just not descriptive enough. Keep it up.
Want to edit mine?
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=368992

[forgotton fire]

it's generic in the word usage and the idea of the song, but it's still good.

[Bad Blood]

to me, its too basic. Alot of work could be done.

[HypnotiQSorcerer]

Generic is def the word thats written all over this peice,

alot of work needs to be done
, you can use this as a template and structurize it later,
that is if you wish...