andysmit
07-21-2005, 09:15 AM
Okay, here is a song that I made a few days ago, and I wanted to know what you people think, this song has no name, if you think of one let me know, and ya I guess the song is kinda weird, but you would also have to here the music, which i have no way of uploading
"You, you look beautiful today,
The sun is shining through your face,
Everything is going better with you,
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, <there is a tune is this
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. < " " " " " "
:repeat:
Pre Chorus:
Everything is going the way it was planned,
It is all according to the picture.
:repeat:
Chorus:
Oh, you are radiant,
You put a smile on my face,
You take away all the frowns and light the dark corners,
... with your brilliance.
:repeat:
You, you are wonderful tonight,
You, your face is better than a sunny day,
And everything is going great,
Ooooooooooooooooh, <these 2 also have a tune
Ooooooooooooooooh,
:repeat:"
"You, you look beautiful today,
The sun is shining through your face,
Everything is going better with you,
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, <there is a tune is this
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. < " " " " " "
:repeat:
Pre Chorus:
Everything is going the way it was planned,
It is all according to the picture.
:repeat:
Chorus:
Oh, you are radiant,
You put a smile on my face,
You take away all the frowns and light the dark corners,
... with your brilliance.
:repeat:
You, you are wonderful tonight,
You, your face is better than a sunny day,
And everything is going great,
Ooooooooooooooooh, <these 2 also have a tune
Ooooooooooooooooh,
:repeat:"