Flamingo: Queen of the Skies

[Byron]

Here is a song I wrote, I like it a lot, you might not understand parts due to the fact it is flamingo info, for example fo-nee-contris ruber ruber is their scientific name.
CRIT 4 crit

Flamingo: Queen of the Skies

Verse
From Santo Domingo can you speak the lingo
Crimson or vermillion we are flamingo

From one large egg to queen of the skies
We eat shrimp not stupid flies

Chorus:
Fla-min-go oh – uh oh- uh (x2)
Fla-min-go wah-uh-oh-uh (x2)
Foe-nee-coptris ruber ruber (x2)
Fla-min-go wah-uh-oh-uh (x2)

Verse
Nesting in lagoons or on a lake
Don’t come near us for goodness sake

we stand on one leg and have big beaks
we can peck your eyes and it will hurt for weeks

Chorus
Fla-min-go oh – uh oh- uh (x2)
Fla-min-go wah-uh-oh-uh (x2)
Foe-nee-coptris ruber ruber (x2)
Fla-min-go wah-uh-oh-uh (x2)

Verse
Flamingos use their bills to filter their food
Our food is stamped it is not chewed

We’re really cool birds with an eye-catching pink
Our spiny piston-like tongue helps us drink

Outro
Fla-ma-ma-min-go
(repeat)

[AnAlienOfNothing]

This seems like some drunken lullabye or some step-dance drunk people do after a few too many margaritas. My opinion. C'mon, you can do better :lol:

[StrangelyBrewed13]

Nice. I laughed my *** of. This would make a great hidden track. Now if i was judging serious id say the ryhmes are forced, the imagery leaves a bit to be disired, and ask why you wrote this in the first place. But who has time. Funny song...5.5/10 Heres mine http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=367799