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Shaft!
07-16-2005, 09:38 PM
I really wish I could have added vocals and sort of cleaned it up a bit, but I have a few more things to do and I liked the idea of keeping it "straight" like this so you can comment on the guitar.
Someday, vocals will be added, but right now some comments regarding improvements to be made and whatnot would be greatly appreciated.

http://www.myspace.com/silvereaglecharleston

Yes, a MySpace.

Mr. Squiggles
07-17-2005, 06:40 AM
Very cool, the recrording quality is good. It's a little repetitive but I still like the guitar riffs. Good Job.

stoivenismyname
07-17-2005, 06:51 AM
IMO the rif sounds a bit like part of the main riff of the song Heart Breaker by ledzeppelin. it sounds cool, but i think u should make up some more tunes to give the song some more variation, instead of repeating the same riff again and again, it gets boring after awhile. also, you need vocals. keep working on it :thumb: