The Fiction We Live Cover

[bryceguitar]

I am 15 years old and have been playing guitar for a little over a year.
I decided to do a cover song of The Fiction We Live by From Autumn to Ashes.
I usually do not sing, but i chose to for fun. tell me what you think please.
http://www.purevolume.com/bryceguitar

PS- Please Dont make this a bash thread.

[bryceguitar]

anyone?

[bryceguitar]

o yeah. if u have a band and you review me i'll review you back. now someone PLEASE review my cover song.
thanks

[Spiked]

well I havn't heard the original song but standing on it's own it's pretty good. Vocals could be louder and are a little flat-sounding to my ear. Nothing much to say about the guitar work, it's not a very complicated song. Does the original have drums/bass?

[bryceguitar]

nope. the original is just acoustic.
and thanks for listening!

[LetsRoc]

sounds good Bryce, Keep workin at it...I haven't heard the original either for 15 you are well on your way.

let me know what you think of our stuff, try All those voices...
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=366758

[bryceguitar]

i am listening to "all those voices".
i really like the reverb on the vocals. i like the bass line a lot to. this is a really cool song. it KIND OF reminds me of the cure. just the mood that it sets. i really like it though. you guys definitely have something going. KEEP IT UP.

[LetsRoc]

give the rest a try if you find the time , we take turns singing and the sound varies quite a bit, thank you very much for the feedback

[bryceguitar]

anyone else have comments on my cover song?
If you want to listen to the original and compare mine and theirs it is called "The Fiction We Live" by From Autumn To Ashes.

Thank you

[bryceguitar]

bump

[bryceguitar]

i re-did the vocals.

can any vocalists listen to this song and give me advice because i've just started out singing


thank you

[bryceguitar]

will someone please listen to the fiction we live and give me advice on the vocals?
thank you

[bryceguitar]

bump

[hobbesdj]

not bad for just starting singing, and being 15. Good job! :thumb:

[bryceguitar]

thank you.

[nickermell]

will someone please listen to the fiction we live and give me advice on the vocals?
thank you
Ya I'm a new vocalist too and I really dont know how to sing (see TNT (http://www.purevolume.com/thepylons) ) Advice would be great.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Vocals can be taught (to an extent). You sounded a little strained the whole time, perhaps practicing with the song. I've heard the original, and while I don't think the vocals were all the good to begin with on the CD, you might have some potential if you work on it. Playing and singing is a hard thing to do, so if you could get that down with even a half-decent voice, you'd make a good song writer.

[bryceguitar]

thanks for the reply. anymore singing advice?

[bryceguitar]

???

[nuetralboyancybass]

i like it, although i dont kno much about vocals

[bryceguitar]

thanks for the reply.

[bryceguitar]

its been a while from the last reply. is there anymore advice?

[zumankii]

Hi!
I think this is realy great! It certenly shows that you have the right "feeling" in both the guitar and the vocals, timing is great and you hit the keys very nice...dont waste that talant!! keep on playing and you have all the potentionals to be a great artist!!!
(Sorry my english....beeing swedish an all that)
//Zumanii

[bryceguitar]

thanks a lot

[BassiclyLow]

Nice, but have you been Smoking Since Early Childhood?
Just kidding man, but yeah I like it.

/Plays bass
/sucks at singing
/has no Critiques

[bryceguitar]

thanks?