New Song.

[Stringbreaker]

Well this is a basis of a song I am working on.
The solo is pretty crappy I have a hard time soloing in this key but this song just doesn't sound right in any other key.
I will hopefully get something better to record on than My Digitech Rp-50.
Please let me know what you think.
Scream your dream's (http://s7.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2ODD6QFDZEQQ725GDMO9K2RV7Z)
I have been playing for a year and 4 month's so If you want to rate my playing even though it's not at it's best in this song.
Thank you.
Comment's good or bad appreciated.

[cramboli]

love the drums.... and with the music its good the playing is better seeing as though at least you know how to make music..... 6.5/10

[Stringbreaker]

Thank's man, And you rated it higher than I would have.

[Local_Skater]

love the drums.... and with the music its good the playing is better seeing as though at least you know how to make music..... 6.5/10

I hope that is sarcasm about the drums. It's just the drum machine built into the pedal. The rest was pretty bad though. It just sounded off to be honest. Keep trying.

[Stringbreaker]

I hope that is sarcasm about the drums. It's just the drum machine built into the pedal. The rest was pretty bad though. It just sounded off to be honest. Keep trying.
Thank's for the honesty.

[cramboli]

I hope that is sarcasm about the drums. It's just the drum machine built into the pedal. The rest was pretty bad though. It just sounded off to be honest. Keep trying.
It was sarcasim because I have the same pedal and that is one of the better practice beats... and I've heard alot worse music...

[Stringbreaker]

It was sarcasim because I have the same pedal and that is one of the better practice beats... and I've heard alot worse music...
Haha I have nice gear I just don't feel like running my halfstack into my audiocard for fear of blowing it. So I use some piece of crap I got with my first guitar.
This is one of the song's on my soundclick I have 2 other's.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/michaelfurman.htm
I have made some revision's to all of them so if you have been here the song's are a bit different.

[pyroseraphin]

Your style kinda reminds me of mine. Lots of minor scalish sounding stuff. Quality is pretty bad though, but sometimes it actually sounds good. It's kinda unique. I don't think you can blow a soundcard.

[Stringbreaker]

Your style kinda reminds me of mine. Lots of minor scalish sounding stuff. Quality is pretty bad though, but sometimes it actually sounds good. It's kinda unique. I don't think you can blow a soundcard.
If you overpower it too much.
Soundcard's have been known to fry.
They don't literally blow but you can **** them up.
Calling it unique is the greatest compliment you could have payed me.
I actually lot play alot heavier stuff most of the time I just couldn't find a decent heavy distortion on here to do my typical Metalcore/thrash stuff.
But I am also very heavily influenced by the blue's and it show's on these recording's I was like wow where did that stuff come from.
Thank's man.

[Stringbreaker]

Anyone else?