New Acoustic Song Intro

[Phototropic]

Yeah this is the intro of a song I'm currently working on :)

Pretty darn happy with the intro, but haven't finished the rest of the song yet

Here's the intro + verse

It's called 'Sunshine'

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/hurricaneuk_music.htm

Excuse some of the bass notes which are off :(

I'd appreciate some feedback :thumb:

Especially on how to make it better

[GimmeSlack12]

How to make it better? Write some lyrics and start singin. Don't be shy.

[Phototropic]

Thanks man, but as I've already said I haven't finished it

And I won't be singing on it, my singer will be