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Robin_ogn
07-07-2005, 06:22 PM
This song is taken from our 3 track demo we just recorded.. Feedback appreciated.
It`s called Two worlds
http://home.online.no/~aognedal/TW.mp3
El-Ahrairah
07-07-2005, 06:30 PM
Nice. A bit more bass I'd add, otherwise, good playing, nice voice.
Robin_ogn
07-07-2005, 06:32 PM
Nice. A bit more bass I'd add, otherwise, good playing, nice voice.
Thank you :) I will add more bass at the studio tomorrow ;d Really appreciate your feedback!
ibanezhunny
07-07-2005, 06:33 PM
I likey. :D
Robin_ogn
07-07-2005, 06:39 PM
I likey. :D
Thank you so much :D
The Musician
07-07-2005, 06:40 PM
It's good, but the double bass, I think that's what it is, gets annoying. You sound like a watered down Rush. :thumb:
Robin_ogn
07-07-2005, 06:43 PM
It's good, but the double bass, I think that's what it is, gets annoying. You sound like a watered down Rush. :thumb:
Ok, i see.. But we can`t really do anything about that now, because the recording`s are done.. What do you mean with ''a watered down rush'' (Not so good in English :confused:
superfascist
07-07-2005, 06:49 PM
It's not too shabby at all. Sort of reminds me of X Japan for some reason. The singer is good, except he needs to add more feeling to it. It's just kind of like he's bored. The guitar playing is really good too. The only thing I would suggest about that though is to add some bass to it or something.
Robin_ogn
07-07-2005, 06:51 PM
It's not too shabby at all. Sort of reminds me of X Japan for some reason. The singer is good, except he needs to add more feeling to it. It's just kind of like he's bored. The guitar playing is really good too. The only thing I would suggest about that though is to add some bass to it or something.
Singer: I will work on it :)
superfascist
07-07-2005, 06:55 PM
Singer: I will work on it :)

Listener: That's the spirit :)



I saved your song on my computer. :thumb:
Robin_ogn
07-07-2005, 06:56 PM
Listener: That's the spirit :)



I saved your song on my computer. :thumb:
Cool :D
Robin_ogn
07-07-2005, 06:58 PM
By the way, We are all 15, except the singer, he is 18
superfascist
07-07-2005, 06:59 PM
By the way, We are all 15, except the singer, he is 18

Even more awesome.
Robin_ogn
07-07-2005, 07:06 PM
Even more awesome.
Thank you even more! Anyone else?
Escher
07-07-2005, 07:09 PM
Very nice
Robin_ogn
07-07-2005, 07:18 PM
Very nice
Thanks:D
Escher
07-07-2005, 07:21 PM
Thanks:D
You're welcome :)
Escher
07-07-2005, 07:21 PM
Do you have a website?
Robin_ogn
07-07-2005, 07:23 PM
Do you have a website?
No, not yet. But we are working on it :) We will post the link here when we get one :thumb:
superfascist
07-08-2005, 01:01 AM
What's the name of the your band?
Po0sH
07-08-2005, 02:54 AM
That was amazing. If I could make two suggestions, is that the singer needs to make his voice a little better, maybe by adding a little whisper, or pushing more from the gut, and when he holds his notes, I would love to hear some vibrato on it.

Besides that, that was brilliant.
the_only_singer
07-08-2005, 04:26 AM
Turn down the bass drums. And the vocals need some work, but you are on your way my friend, it sounded great.
StevieRayHendrix
07-08-2005, 11:23 PM
I like it, i thought the intro was a little long.



http://www.purevolume.com/lyingtomorrow
MaNtraX
07-10-2005, 07:02 AM
I like it, i thought the intro was a little long.



http://www.purevolume.com/lyingtomorrow
Thank you! Anyone else? (im the singer)
Sammy_L_D
08-07-2005, 02:34 PM
OH MAN, this is sweet.

Awesome stuff. :)